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Overall this is a really nice novel! I love the story so far and the descriptions are beautiful. There are a couple of punctuation and capitalization errors, but nothing glaring. I have to admit, I was a bit confused by the synopsis as it’s not a traditional one, but overall amazing job!

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awww thank you so much for your review, especially about the pacing! It really made my day. Have a wonderful rest of your day!

thank you so much for the review! I hope you have an absolutely amazing day!!

Thank you!!! Hope you have an amazing day!

Couple of tidbits from the author before you get started reading: - This book deals with a lot of mature themes such as abuse, neglect, and drug abuse. Just wanted to give you guys the heads up before you start reading. - This book will also update twice a week with chapters usually from 1000-2000 words. This may change in the future, but right now I’m super busy with real-life things, and I want to give you guys the best possible content. - Romance is not the main driver of this story’s plot, but there will be plenty of romantic subplots, despite what the genre title says. I’m still trying to figure out how to get it to say just Fantasy, so if anyone has any ideas absolutely please let me know. - Lastly, thank you so much for reading! Each and every one of you makes my day brighter and better. Please do let me know what you think of my novel, and if you have any novel recommendations, I would love to read them!!!

I can’t quite place it, but something about this I really like and for that I’m going to give you a rare 5-star rating. I think it’s the general feel of the novel, because I just really find myself wanting to read this, despite the repetition issues. Your writing is very fluid and it really holds the story together. Amazing job author!!!

This seems super interesting so far. I absolutely love (well love isn't the right word because I dislike most of them but this is good) the characters. There are some grammar and punctuation mistakes, but nothing major. Also, I think it would really benefit this story if the first chapter was a little more suspense-filled, but everything else about this story is awesome. Amazing novel!!

awww thank you!! I’m super glad you enjoyed it!!

XD Icarus is an absolute king <33 thank you so much for the support!!

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This story is amazing! I love the sci-fi space ship setting - it kind of reminds me of The Long Way to a Small Angry Planet by Becky Chambers. Similarly, the characters are super unique and full of life, which is honestly an amazing feat. As someone who writes a fast-paced novel, I have to admit this one is going a little too fast. I like the fast pacing, but once the story plot gets a little compromised it becomes an issue. Secondly, there are a lot of weird sentences, some which are not even sentences at all. While non-sentence sentences are usually not an issue in many books because they’re showing emphasis and personality, I just feel like the ones in this book are in weird places, detracting from precious details. Similarly, there really isn’t a lot of sentence variety, with lots of sentences being short but sweet. This contributes greatly to the rushed feeling your novel gives off. Also, I would love just a bit more showing and less telling, because I feel like I am told everything that Bex is thinking very directly. Lastly, I just want to congratulate you on the amazing character design, which is definitely some of the best I have seen!

thank you so much for the review and the wonderful comment! I’d love to hear what you think of the later chapters since they are a little less edited! I hope you have a wonderful day!

awww thank you so much! I really appreciate the review! Hope you have a wonderful day!