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Yeah no.. I thought this would be a dark story but yikes, chessy lines, amateurish writing. I felt like i was reading a diary of a 15 year old with some fantasy elements. Main character is beyond edgy and dialogues are out of the place.

after chapter 180+ or so translation quality drops very badly, i would not recommend reading this here at all. I wonder what kind of machine the translator used to translate this thing, its no different from mtl..

one word and that is BORING. I am sorry but this is no different than generic reincarnation novels, its subpar and author probably used ai in the first chapters and thats turn off more.

It was a okay read till chapter 300+ or so but author has no loyalty to the story and i think that is the biggest red flag, until he fixes it, it doesnt deserve a score above 2.

I was thinking the title doesn't make sense because Asher doesn't feel like a villain :D

dropped after learning mc becames a slave to some chick, what worse is he doesnt get revenge and even fell in love with the woman who made him slave, unbelievable lol

Firstly the biggest reason i dropped this, after the first volume author started to yap too much. I have no idea how to imagine the fights, scenery etc. with that confusing, random narrative. Well, thanks anyway.

Dear author, my suggestion would be to write the chapters in advance before start posting again. That way, in case of emergencies or other unforeseen circumstances, your audience won't be left hanging and you won't risk losing your audience.

the readers probably wouldnt mind it if he went hiatus, after all everyone has a life outside of work but going hiatus without any note is really disappointing.

is this really dropped? if so, huge disappointment.. i was thinking the story progressing smoothly and we will soon get to the excited part..

there is no romance i hope the story doesnt focus romance.

i am not sure main character is really the main character anymore. his screen time is so little and chapters are too short so i can't tell. the pacing is slow asf.

Mr. Author dont get me wrong i like reading your story and your writing seems to get good with every chapter but you really need to stop breaking the fourth wall man, it's just annoying.

We really need a physical copy for this.