It surprises me that this novel has this many fanboys, this is like one of the most overrated webnovel i have seen over the years. There is no emotional depth in it, like you can kill any major character and it wouldn't feel a thing, you can't connect with the characters, even with the main character. Grammar and prose are pretty painful in both elements. Maybe the most repetitive use of adjectives I've ever read, and I'm not exaggerating. You would think "tenebrous" and "taciturn" were actual surnames judging by how often they are used before certain characters. The dialogues feels cheesy and boring sometimes. I mean i really tried enjoying it, who wouldn't want to read a good webnovel while also having a good time..
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Yeah no.. I thought this would be a dark story but yikes, chessy lines, amateurish writing. I felt like i was reading a diary of a 15 year old with some fantasy elements. Main character is beyond edgy and dialogues are out of the place.
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
after chapter 180+ or so translation quality drops very badly, i would not recommend reading this here at all. I wonder what kind of machine the translator used to translate this thing, its no different from mtl..
Eastern · Er Gen
yeah, as i follower of this novel from the beginning im done, thanks.
ch 453 TRAP
Fantasy · Raos_IOI
we are not the buddha author, please stop testing our patience.
ch 452 Trap
sigh
ch 447 Judgement
one word and that is BORING. I am sorry but this is no different than generic reincarnation novels, its subpar and author probably used ai in the first chapters and thats turn off more.
Fantasy · RealmWeaver
It was a okay read till chapter 300+ or so but author has no loyalty to the story and i think that is the biggest red flag, until he fixes it, it doesnt deserve a score above 2.
I was thinking the title doesn't make sense because Asher doesn't feel like a villain :D
tbh i dont even expect anything from this novel, its just a huge let down.
ch 419 Trap of Memories V - Crumble
dropped after learning mc becames a slave to some chick, what worse is he doesnt get revenge and even fell in love with the woman who made him slave, unbelievable lol
Firstly the biggest reason i dropped this, after the first volume author started to yap too much. I have no idea how to imagine the fights, scenery etc. with that confusing, random narrative. Well, thanks anyway.
Eastern · Anvelope
Dear author, my suggestion would be to write the chapters in advance before start posting again. That way, in case of emergencies or other unforeseen circumstances, your audience won't be left hanging and you won't risk losing your audience.
😭😭😭
ch 397 Unknown
the readers probably wouldnt mind it if he went hiatus, after all everyone has a life outside of work but going hiatus without any note is really disappointing.
is this really dropped? if so, huge disappointment.. i was thinking the story progressing smoothly and we will soon get to the excited part..
there is no romance i hope the story doesnt focus romance.
i am not sure main character is really the main character anymore. his screen time is so little and chapters are too short so i can't tell. the pacing is slow asf.
Mr. Author dont get me wrong i like reading your story and your writing seems to get good with every chapter but you really need to stop breaking the fourth wall man, it's just annoying.
Fantasy · Night_Crawler619
We really need a physical copy for this.
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
It surprises me that this novel has this many fanboys, this is like one of the most overrated webnovel i have seen over the years. There is no emotional depth in it, like you can kill any major character and it wouldn't feel a thing, you can't connect with the characters, even with the main character. Grammar and prose are pretty painful in both elements. Maybe the most repetitive use of adjectives I've ever read, and I'm not exaggerating. You would think "tenebrous" and "taciturn" were actual surnames judging by how often they are used before certain characters. The dialogues feels cheesy and boring sometimes. I mean i really tried enjoying it, who wouldn't want to read a good webnovel while also having a good time..
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree