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My favorite novel, and Right now i am just waiting for update

Hello, after reading about the first 100 of the chapters, i must say the book’s pretty good, especially for reading as a pastime. Although i must say the chapters at the outset are adorned with characters just conversing about childish subjects and cringeworthy remarks. I must say as the author has improved with his/her writing as the chapters have materialized. The only downside is that the author doesn’t describe the characters often whenever they appear. As a result, I just end up forgetting how most of the characters look like whenever I come back reading it after a while, due to the fact that my mind is also preoccupied with reading many other books other than this one. So i hope the author considers this little flaw. Ty!

Best mc, I love the book, It’s the best story i’ve read so far out of all the others with the same genre.

Hello author, coming from a reader who has read up to chapter 206 already, I really love the book you’ve written, but my only problem is the mc, from the first 140 chapters or so, i have gotten really frustated about the fact that his mentality revolves around depending too much on jayden to alter his terrible fate, or death. In this case, there are so many INSTANCES where he could’ve taken advantage of the situation like the power that prevents him from dying for 3 times, or when he could’ve taken the opportunity to redeem his past doings to the main cast or heroines, he rarely did those things. Such things give a really frustating feeling to a reader like me who long for mc’s improvement. And the part when he hides his identity to avoid getting close to the heroines, it doesn’t make sense, why do mcs keep doing this annoying cliche. I thought the mc had already realized the fact that he could just form a relationship with a heroine and convince her to help jayden? Gosh the mc is annoyingly dense, he has faced many situations and found out revelations only to show little to no traces of character development. Author, I love the book, but as the chapters go on, please focus more on the flaws, especially the mc’s development, I‘d love to keep my patience and read the book more, the notion of redeeming the past evil deeds of the mc to the main cast, really captivated me, but the plot for the first hundred of chapters has done the other way around. Which is the cause of this frusrated feeling i am venting out right now. Nevertheless, i love the novel, ill keep supporting it, and ill keep reading it while longing for development, and as long as the author doesn’t decide to just drop it

Love this novel, my only problem is that i can’t wait very long for the chapters to update because i am really invested in the story, but i thought it compensates for the fact that the grammar and structures of the sentences are well constructed and the plot is intriguing as well to the point that every chapter ending provides me a bit of a sense of frustation. The only thing i recommend to the author is that he should start describing character appearances during their debut or those that are not described yet, like adam, i don’t know what he looks like yet, correct me if i‘m wrong because I have forgotten some of the chapters i’ve read, especially the former half of the chapters.