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Its way worse than i expected not my type of story adding Oc/Au world minato seeming not as strong as you'll hoped slow progression like not needed slow seeming 1000 chapter slow before it ends not my type of fic

Great book ìdea he just went at it the wrong way similer to his kuroko fic of always hiding his power which doesn't work in action like these and irritates the hell out of readers adding Ocs to an anime with a variety of characters and flashbacks But good writing needs to work on action scenes which is due to him holding back alot but as of now since flashback ended it got alot better as he clarified the abillity but he still is holding back and is on an whole bunch of words with not much to show for it as i doubt he can beat netoro as he said but hopes it get better or author moves on from these always holding back fics and all secretive for 200 chapters like the kuroko fic but it seems to be imporving.[718]

hmm alright im cool between 1-2 With an Hxh fic love the work you do on your fics

This is up there for best blue lock fic but its going down as the gap between kira and the cast ain't widing also he focus on the other character too damn much author please fix these soon as im seeing this starting to happen more and more

absoulutely hate how he stays weaker than yamato for the longest time and doesn't utilise her to fight stronger people then like if he was the strongest then coo thats why but its crap and hella slow and it feels as though he gaining no strangth even after learning haki and marine styles stupid crap and more non fic fruits don't read

author if there is romance can you tell me who?

who the other 2 leads are in this story?

Okay author congrats its still very good so far and had little to no mistakes (decisions i dissagree with) in the story

came back and am very glad i did author great work and all i can give as of now is powerstones startin tmrw i gave dem away already

only thing good about this fic is the uploads i say and mean Highly to not read this.2 l

hopefully its bad where im at chp 37 does it get better from there aurhor or someone else

Author please don't drop all the good teen wolf fics drop after 30 chapters or so this has potential

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Thats cool then but keep up the great work

im giving you my power stones if this dropped in the 30-50 chapter range ima be so done but author how much chapters you have in mind?

Author you know who the FL lead is or atleast who its leaning towards the most please??