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After being awakened by a raging headache and faint memories of his past life, Tsubakihara Yuuji found a strange smartphone he had never seen before.
Opening it, he found a single question that would change his life and many others for the better, forever.
[Do you wish to join the Multiverse Group Chat?]
[Yes] / [No]
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I'm starting to reach my limit with the behavior of the MC and how the story progresses.I'm going to name some things that I didn't like about the story. 1-The MC is pathetic, literally (and that comes from an h). Nothing more to say. 2-The progress of the story is "too" slow, so much so that I wouldn't be surprised if many skip chapters, simply to see the start of some mission of the dimensional chat group. 3-There is some other hole in the story that is simply not consistent. 4-I am completely sure that no member of the chat along with the MC progressed with the skills they obtained or have. I won't even mention the "change of history". 5- I will not even mention the expressions, communications, attitudes, etc. It's not the best I've seen but it's not the worst either, we just need to improve these parts and the story will be even more acceptable. There's more but I just don't feel like writing it all down. That's all I hope the author improves these things. Este es el puntaje que le doy a la historia. Lo cambiaré cuando vea un mejor progreso pero por ahora este es el puntaje.
Pretty good start and most categories of writing are decent, the only issue I have is when the MC becomes handsome and by that I mean so much so that after about the 4th chapter every other chapter is about how handsome he is or how much girls blush when they stare at him. I have nothing against handsomeness but it adds no substance when its mentioned for 9 chapters straight with no development or regular usage of the actual chat group
Anti 5 star bot spam. I could give a really huge and constructive review for the author to improve from but i'm too tired to list the huge issues that anyone with half a brain cell can see so imma just bullet point it. -MC is far too passive in everything, in terms of relationships and self progression. -Took 18 chapters and a whole three months for the story to actually begin on it's premise. (Dimensional chat group) -The author makes extreme ,borderline gay, descriptions of the MC's sculptured, chiselled and perfect body that puts gods to shame. So much so that every female within observable distance creams themselves. (Seriously half the book is a description of his abs or something similar) - Very repetitive and predictable/cliche. -Writing is decent. However, the writing is very sluggish and feels blocky(?). Potential to be a great book but ruined by a loser protagonist thats given everything on a platter and does nothing with it.
Most characters are based around his family/women that he gets to know? Or become acquintences basically his harem it didn't come to that point but by the way things are going i could safely say that Our main character is a reincarnated person even though in his next life he has shown no remarkable ability no maturity no emotional intelligence his communication skills are worse than a toddler and before the "divine physique" he was but a mere simpleton without any noteworthy quality Most of his relationships are superficial and cringe enough that i myself have almost experienced seizure reading it one time he may be a blushing mess not being able to speak other times he gets manhandled by muh scary women cliche of animes and the others he acts like a character out of twilight with gentle smiles getting in peoples personal space saying all kinds of stuff etc This is obviously meant for our MC to be a natural at charming women but instead of such it makes him seen like a person with personality disorder and considering his denseness that really might be the case Unlike the title there is nothing noteworthy about the chat group it was just created for our MC to be important since he was such a unimportant side character for him to be elevated to the status of MC he was to be given the "divine physique" gift WHICH the author has been talking for nearly half and more chapters it is clear example that most of his relationships are superficial and if he didn't look good his family or the women he speaks could care less about him And again nothing important happened with the chat group and only reason for it to exist is to elevate MC's status and make him important so i'm just going to dismiss that OVERALL: Its pretty bad. If you really want something to read go to MTL or watch twilight their romance is atleast better than this.
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I legit thought it was actually good yhen I read it. I was heavily disappointed. Read it and you'll find out why or read some other reviews.
Not shameless, but just extremely proud and excited about my own story~!! I have a lot already planned and I can't wait to put those ideas into the story and share it with you all~!!! Hope you enjoy~!!!
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The male lead is a shame, he is also homosexual. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
It’s confusing how someone can write a trash ff. Literally if you read other ff similar to this and aren’t dumb you can make a perfect one So how?
The story development is so slow that it is mind-numbing the mc feels like a robot but lacks the smartness of one the amount of cringe before chapter 21 or so is horrendous, tone it down with "oh he is so handsome that it puts gods to shame" like stop its cringe And aika is just no and I don't remember her being genuinely into girls to the point that she is bi and the yuri you are setting up is a no, with the mc's weak and thin personality its more like he is a part of aika's harem and yuuji is just a dog that fetches the girls
Twenty chapters to use the group chat and half of that is about the protagonist and what Adonis is like, the author has a problem with that issue and needs to fix it later a rewrite.
It's a cross over fanfic with dimensional chat. His home is a cross of several shows, and since they're school SOL genre it fits well. Use of characters from popular shows (Quintuplets, Lelouch, Tatsuya Shiba, etc,) and updates once a week, with only a couple grammar mistakes a chapter. Over all, seems good right? Wrong. Each chapter is half full of the MC being described over and again as the most handsome male ever, and how he's so much better than anyone. A quarter describes a female that's already been introduced. But the biggest drawback is that the story doesn't progress. The biggest thing is Aika Kiryuu getting contacted by Rias Gremory. The MC is so overly passive, even though he has confirmed knowledge that EVERY WOMAN WANTS TO JUMP HIS BONES, INCLUDING HIS REINCARNATION'S FAMILY (Master Piece family) and he literally just... I try to be understanding. But the way the pace is... it's torturous. Chapter 16 and he finally hugs a girl he likes (who is also completely gaga over him,) and he thinks it's some great accomplishment. Always complaining about his prize that gave him his new attractiveness. 0 ability to be proactive with any girl. You can get some humor, but after a couple chapters of the same amount of nothing important happening... I'd rather strap myself in a chair and watch Boku no Pico.
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Author Bro I understand how you feel when you make a single chapter. First you have to gather information, create dialogues & scenario, than story & character development. Respect for author creating good kind of novel
Well, the story has several problems, the main one is the chat room, other than that they all have a broken power and are very intelligent. the subject of the chat is barely touched and the missions without mentioning that the choice of the members was terrible and we must stop mentioning the beauty of the protagonists and that which makes all women in heat already boring
So, I will say right away this fic is not about a chat group. this is waste of life for 1 normal chapter there are 12 empty chapters, each chapter says how beautiful the hero is. and the hero literally does nothing.
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Honestly i look forward to seeing where this goes as a man of culture i believe im quite excited for "plot" if you know what i mean hehehe..
You should end with the mention of how beautiful your character is, it really seems like you have a complex, the companions are too charismatic and powerful and you can't capture their essence, you could also focus more on group chat.
Story progression too slow, the mc looks pathetic he's in an h world but doesn't do anything, I know the author wants to give the story a real air, but it's already repetitive, and now I start to set up a yuri. I'm dropping I'll be back if it gets good or something interesting happens in the novel for now it's goodbye
Too repetitive, its become a slice of life fic that focuses on the MC's looks and superficial relationships and almost no chat room/multiverse and the story hasnt progressed for multiple chapters.