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And U.... wanker

My only problem is that every chapter has the same speech about 'let's do this together', 'we're all family here, and we're going to help', 'great powers with great responsibilities', you know, it seems like a copy of the previous chapter, but said by another character, sometimes not even that, is the same. It's an interesting adventure idea, but it's already preconceived who is black and who is white, good and evil. There is no gray in history. At least until chapter 18.

Honestly, it was a bit rushed and full of morbid explanations about everything, but it was still readable, however, the misfortune of the clueless harem came. I don't know why people want a harem so much, when there aren't enough cocks for all that. Make him date the girls over time, each in turn, developing the relationship calmly. But NO, much better to create a sexual aura, divine beauty and that's it, cock and pussy on the menu. Good luck to those who write, good reading to those who continue.

There's nothing to read, so it's unimaginable to know how it got such a high score. Having a Patreon is ok, but just posting here to keep your story appearing with pay to read is ridiculous. Good luck.

14 chapters read

Despite the defective Chinese catchphrases, and the lack of correctness of the names of some characters, it could be an interesting read, but just that, interesting. To be GOOD, it's quite far