Story- Good Power system- good Story potential- exceptional Character development- Above average Emotional prospective- Need little improvement System Designing- Exceptional Keep up good work
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thank your for review, and enjoy the story.
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ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Getting all the information
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ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Getting all the information
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You guessed it correctly.
Genesis who was just reading synopsis of a story on his phone when crossing a road just a moment ago was now in comfortable and dark place.聽
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Well, there will be more thrill in the future.
Haha, you got the reference so correct. Anime lover forever.
And finally person on the opposite side picked the audio call and answered the question of genesis saying," Sir, writer, My name is Sakura Trashy, and i want to say that this seemed liked forced ending, and it seemed to me that story still have space to continue without getting toxic or boring." Voice was beautiful girl voice.
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Thank you, i will keep writing.
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ch 0 1 Chapter 01 The Second Generation of Rich Rebirth
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that word has been updated with pokemon.
ch 0 1 Chapter 01 The Second Generation of Rich Rebirth
Anime & Comics 路 Doom_Writer
Approve.The first chapter is extra exciting and intriguing, followed by the awakening of the Mc and his unique skills. So far I didn't find problems in writing quality. That is all! Please upload more chapters 馃檹.
Gene Evolution: Monster Simulator
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