D_king

I'm gonna act like my fellow novelist and drop a five star for the book. I also encourage you guys to drop a five star as well. lol.So, drop a review, tell me on how I can improve, and enjoy the story ^_^

Still improving, pls u guys should drop a review or comment.

thanks. it's good having some motivation

so this is kinda like my first novel (very first). so I hope u'll enjoy it. Imma try and improve and also work on the story so.

good story though, but the downside is that u spend a lot of time explaining irrelevant things. i mean i skipped 5 chapters due to reading things that makes no sense. but the story is really good, keep it up