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thank you for the review. I'll take this feedback into consideration as a improvement to get better. As for why its so fast pace, its because its an apocalypse. Why wait when you might never get to see tomorrow? And as for mutanting human,the only mutating human is MC. I would say its more just a superpower, not really mutating human in groups etc. yeah the female lead are a little bland, sorry about that. First time writing and didnt add enough depths. As for why Xiaoyun didnt grow up as much, Songming experience is more of a dream. Would you treat your dream and remember it fully?

You aren't wrong. It was still an active warzone they were in. But calling it doing their job was a stretch. Blackwater never had a good track history (Nisour Square massacre, Fallujah, and Najaf, just to name a few, how they killed civilians). Although it is a bit of a stretch to call it the world that's deciding to put the military complex on trial when it is the U.S. DOJ and the U.S. government that decided to hold them accountable rather than let them go. Blackwater never even held that big of a role in the fight. They were just security guards compared to actual U.S. soldiers who fought in Iraq.