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oh no i intend for them to be actually characters with growth and such, just assuring it won't be at the cost of others. (There must a be a thousand team seven fics where an oc replaces Sasuke or Sakura lol)
Yuno chuckled. She doubts either of them knew it quite yet. But the blonde was spoken for. Yuno would have to find another toy. Shino may be broken yet.
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I really debated doing such, but there is a FF fic that does it really well so decided not to.
Yuno chuckled. She doubts either of them knew it quite yet. But the blonde was spoken for. Yuno would have to find another toy. Shino may be broken yet.
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I think everyone's read a story where some OC kinda takes over. I hate them myself, however Yuno and others OCs I'll use won't be big roles nor take anyone else's screen time. maybe she'll win you over but we'll see. yunos gotten good feedback so far. as for Hinata she will be getting her time too. (her eventually emergence has been rated highly by other readers.) and i also think Hinata is best girl, but that's why I'm trying to build up the others ones.
Yuno chuckled. She doubts either of them knew it quite yet. But the blonde was spoken for. Yuno would have to find another toy. Shino may be broken yet.
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no doubt there, Neji vs Naruto was my first big fight and never quite liked how it went. I will say I think I do course correct enough to make it up for it, but we'll see. thanks for reading as always and the consistent feedback
ch 16 Chapter 16: Naruto VS Neji
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it's basically add 2 for most canon ages from start of series, they are some differences but it doesn't truly impact the story. mostly 18 though yes
"Like dogs." Inochi growled. Neither of the two teens could even attempt a complaint before Kakashi picked both up. Similar to the way a seasoned farmer would pick up sacks of potatoes. The two attempted to struggle, but their sensei was shockingly strong, holding both with an iron grip.
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you are correct
ch 14 Chapter 14: Measuring Up
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funny you mention it, at one point she was one I considered, but ultimately choose not to. funny you mention it though, the Chunin Exams bring something similar
Though as awesome as that was, Naruto was mostly excited due to the bar visit finally happening. With the Genin all having various schedules and injuries, planning a big event for all of them had been difficult. But with Ino's desperate desire for a party and a chance to gossip, Shikamaru wanting to unite his old group, and Choji screening each option discussed to find a bar with; Naruto quotes "DAMN GOOD BOOZE AND FOOD!". They had eventually landed a spot and time. And most could even come! Though Sasuke declined, preferring to be on his own. And Kabuto merely didn't seem interested in drinking. So in the end all teams minus Team Six agreed to go out of the bar. Hinata decided to sit out to join Kabuto for his studies. Shikamaru, Choji, and Kiba seemed ecstatic to drink. Naruto himself was unsure but saw no reason to avoid it. Sake hadn't seemed great to him but perhaps tonight would show him what was so enamoring about liquor.
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i get this often but can't fully answer it without spoiling it . but there is a reason for such
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Rough Start
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Their won't be lol, even if that pairing were to happen things will be wildly different from that. That being said I actually like Boruto... somewhat anyway.
"Don't worry about it! Just seemed smart; lemme know if you ever need my help, ya know?" Naruto said with a small, toothy smile. Ino saw it was different from his usual one and had to admit Naruto had undoubtedly gone up in stock today.
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*nods head* Noice. (Why can't I sleep! lol)
ch 107 Chapter 107: Shadow Duo on the Move! Battle of the Jinchuriki Begins!
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yeah your not wrong here, the early chapters aren't to the standard the current ones are, but it would feel weird to rewrite chapters so we own our early mistakes lol
Naruto and Ino then angrily berated the man. Accusing him of wasting their time and now lying blatantly to them. Neji simply offered him his patented "you're not worth my time" stare.
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oh i missed this one! that is a truly valid point, it was meant to increase the mystique of it but never realized how jaring it could be. I do think over time the issues is fixing itself with more elements being explored. but admittedly i can see why it would be frustrating
"Well, of course, you did. You killed the fourth Hokage, after all. You even killed my family, didn't you nine tails!" Mizuki screamed manically. Lee looked back at Naruto, not quite believing it, but to his shock, Naruto looked panicked. Looking at Lee almost pleadingly. Lee didn't know what to say.
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it's fine I just wanted to ensure you weren't forcing yourself through something you didn't like. and make no mistakes i do appreciate feedback even when negative. this won't be my last so flaws are important to learn (like next story I will ensure the premise is more clear and explained) and i excited to talk about it! lol,
"Well, of course, you did. You killed the fourth Hokage, after all. You even killed my family, didn't you nine tails!" Mizuki screamed manically. Lee looked back at Naruto, not quite believing it, but to his shock, Naruto looked panicked. Looking at Lee almost pleadingly. Lee didn't know what to say.
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more of more mature than he was in canon (comparing to kid Naruto not teen lol.) though hes still going to maintain his normal goofiness. I'm sorry if you don't like the story, but if you don't like it you don't have to read it. id love you if you did, but not trying to force this on anyone.
"Well, of course, you did. You killed the fourth Hokage, after all. You even killed my family, didn't you nine tails!" Mizuki screamed manically. Lee looked back at Naruto, not quite believing it, but to his shock, Naruto looked panicked. Looking at Lee almost pleadingly. Lee didn't know what to say.
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mostly true. kushina can probably do so, but a Genin with even more chakra than her wouldn't stand a chance
"Well, let's just say Uzumaki have problems performing jutsu like that. I thought you may be able to brute force it, but that was never realistic, I suppose. See, jutsu, like the clone jutsu, are low-intensive but require fine chakra control. But we have trouble with finer chakra control in cases of Shinobi like you and me with high chakra levels. It's like using a hose to fill a bottle cap; it simply overflows." She lectured. The blonde listened raptly; his mother was a Jounin; she knew her stuff.
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also before you declare him weak maybe read a few chapters. there's a hundred and we're on four. he's barely had the chance to shine yet
"Heh, screw stalling!" Naruto said as he wielded his tanto, grinning crudely. "I owe this loser for years of hate! I'm gonna kick his ass! Naruto then charged toward the Chunin, who had managed to dispel the last clones. As he turned his head, Naruto slammed his knee into Mizuki's face. The blow sent him stumbling back but didn't seem to be effective. Naruto followed, summoning clones, surprised that the ten he intended to summon merely came out as eight. Naruto's chakra was lower than he thought. The testing, training, and now this fight was waning on the jinchuriki's juice. But the blonde merely kept engaging. The clones and him drawing kunai and firing them on the off-balance Chunin. They hit yet once again do no real damage, simply annoying Mizuki. Who with a growl charged forward with a growl swinging in with a right hook. A clone leaped forward, catching the hook and pulling the arm back. Another blonde kicked him in the face while another swept his legs. Naruto smirked as he jumped into the air, another clone grabbing and spinning him before firing him at the down Mizuki.
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i agree, in the early chapters of Despite it All Naruto is weaker than halfway through canon. it would be kinda weird if he wasn't from a writing perspective. but that is intentional. this isn't some OP Naruto story is more a journey one where Naruto grows as opposed to simply is. besides the point of him being older isn't to be stronger but wiser. more adjusted intelligent and socially adept. also Naruto could produce that many clones but didn't need to. he had Lee who was carrying in the fight, and Choji. he didn't need a hundred clones.
"Heh, screw stalling!" Naruto said as he wielded his tanto, grinning crudely. "I owe this loser for years of hate! I'm gonna kick his ass! Naruto then charged toward the Chunin, who had managed to dispel the last clones. As he turned his head, Naruto slammed his knee into Mizuki's face. The blow sent him stumbling back but didn't seem to be effective. Naruto followed, summoning clones, surprised that the ten he intended to summon merely came out as eight. Naruto's chakra was lower than he thought. The testing, training, and now this fight was waning on the jinchuriki's juice. But the blonde merely kept engaging. The clones and him drawing kunai and firing them on the off-balance Chunin. They hit yet once again do no real damage, simply annoying Mizuki. Who with a growl charged forward with a growl swinging in with a right hook. A clone leaped forward, catching the hook and pulling the arm back. Another blonde kicked him in the face while another swept his legs. Naruto smirked as he jumped into the air, another clone grabbing and spinning him before firing him at the down Mizuki.
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oh also he didn't fail, just as Lee and Choji, Naruto passed enough to be considered but failed a requirement, Lee of course would've too being mostly chakra divergent, and Choji was more of their because realistically he wouldve been dead last.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Rough Start
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you are correct, some characters like Samui have been changed slightly. in this case Samui is younger. this won't be the last time for such and it done for a specific reason
Kurotsuchi and Samui both looked on at the awkward standoff in their team. Samui merely sighed, annoyed with the team chemistry being thrown off already.
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