Dakota_Freese

Dakota_Freese

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2024-01-05 Joined Global
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Dakota_Freese
Dakota_Freese
1 months ago
Posted

this story has a chance to be good but there's to much bs going on and the author takes to much time adding chapters and there's to many changes in the story like changing cultivation techniques which is stupid asf when he is given the best technique from the start, and its taking to long to awaken his martial soul and there's to much inconsistencies in his power and the way he uses it like using his dragon power he almost never does which is stupid! where i stopped reading he almost dies bc his power level which should easily kill his opponent if u go by how overwhelming he was throughout the story in every level of his cultivation and he basically gets thrashed bc he won't use his dragon force or whatever its called in the story.

Dakota_Freese
Dakota_Freese
1 months ago
Replied to Pen_Drop

hey quick question r u gonna make his lightning affinity stronger or just stick with ice chaos and shadows? i ask bc lighting is the strongest element outside of time and space and life and death, and it seems like everybody's story's start out with lightning them goes away from it which makes no sense to me bc if it were me I would want to use the strongest element at all times outside of using the big 4!

Dakota_Freese
Dakota_Freese
1 months ago
Commented

hey just a thought ik its ur story but i was thinking how awesome it would be if our guy kent gets back his true potential as a primordial dragon and after he becomes a true primordial celestial dragon god he breaks through to a higher realm and goes to a higher universe after and tries to become a multiversal god that rules over every universe then travels around with his wives and makes a family, or before he breaks through to go to a higher universe he starts a family and creates the strongest family in the multivers then breakthrough and becomes a multiversal dragon god? Just food for thought

Dakota_Freese
Dakota_Freese
1 months ago
Commented

hey im not asking for this chapter but for the whole story bc im all caught up with the later chapters but after I went through the story the first time I forgot to ask this but now im going through it again I came to a part that hasnt had any light on it like other past memory parts have all been gone through! so my question is whats up with this lord chaos we haven't gotten any past memories on him or anything other than when he first showed up in the early part of the story when that lady wanted to make Kent her slave, and no ik chaos is the dragon but like the story said there was 3 personalities that came out which was lord chaos , jest or lord genesis , and the dragon king which is Kent's true self the chaos dragon!

Dakota_Freese
Dakota_Freese
2 months ago
Posted

I hope u make it so he goes past the martial emperor realm and go to a new world and become immortal

Dakota_Freese
Dakota_Freese
2 months ago
Commented

y is there only 4 free chapters, u cant even get interested in a story until u get at least 10 chapters in lol

Dakota_Freese
Dakota_Freese
2 months ago
Commented

is there any info u could give us on lifespan for cultivation realms ? its kind of boring not having details like that for a cultivation story, the hole point of cultivation is to gain more power and lifespan so not having those details kind of takes the point out of it which takes a big part of the stories goal away from it

Dakota_Freese
Dakota_Freese
2 months ago
Posted

when r u gonna do some serious updating on this story and when r u gonna make it so the main characters martial soul awakens instead of being in the egg state its boring how long and drawn out this shit is.

Dakota_Freese
Dakota_Freese
3 months ago
Commented

so my question for the lifespan of the realms is does the lifespan of every realm add on to the lifespan of the previous lifespan or is it like a reset counter for lifespan bc it doesn't make sense for multiple realms having the same low level of lifespan especially since in every cultivation story every realm is a qualitative change to the body and power!

Dakota_Freese
Dakota_Freese
3 months ago
Posted

story is good for the the first half but after that its just a repetitive story and its extremely frustrating, ive already read the full story on google for free and ill tell u it gets annoying especially when ur a fan of dragon cultivation stories! he gets the ability to transform into a dragon but once he gets to a certain level he just stops doing that even tho its his strongest form, oh and another thing that sucks about this story is he just adds women left and right farther down the line but once it gets to the point where they leave the galaxy to get stronger he just leaves for millions of years leaving his family to just cultivate by themselves while he goes out to get stronger. its an annoying story but good till u get to the halfway point then its like a pointless story to read.