Really enjoying the story up to this point! I haven't spotted many grammar mistakes, and I've gotta say, you're churning out those chapters like a champ! 馃槃 My only suggestion would be to take your time with the plot development. 馃摉馃憤
Fantasy 路 J14S07
Honestly the first chapter is very well done, excited for this one. However, I would recommend you increase the chapter updates per day otherwise gaining traction would be difficult.
Urban 路 J14S07
ill stick around, sounds interesting.
ch 0 7 The Magnimus Trial
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Really enjoying the story up to this point! I haven't spotted many grammar mistakes, and I've gotta say, you're churning out those chapters like a champ! 馃槃 My only suggestion would be to take your time with the plot development. 馃摉馃憤
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Fantasy 路 J14S07