Amazing story! Keeps me on the edge of the seat. I love the story development and there are so many questions unanswered. I am generally someone who prefers OP characters but being too overpowered in some places does not make sense which author covers well. Sunny wins and loses. He is appropriately strong. The writing quality is not amazing but it does not make me “give up” on the book… nor would it since the writing is not abysmal. Character design seems flat for some characters but overall, it is good.
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Author here. Hoping for more feedbacks and reviews! Helpful criticism are welcome. Also, I’m always on the lookout for great cases for our protagonists to solve so do throw them my way if you see anything interesting.[img=recommend]
Urban · Jon_Elias_T
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Amazing story! Keeps me on the edge of the seat. I love the story development and there are so many questions unanswered. I am generally someone who prefers OP characters but being too overpowered in some places does not make sense which author covers well. Sunny wins and loses. He is appropriately strong. The writing quality is not amazing but it does not make me “give up” on the book… nor would it since the writing is not abysmal. Character design seems flat for some characters but overall, it is good.
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Fantasy · Guiltythree