Webnovel Author: Ssomeone_No_one - Novel Collection

Don't mind me, just shamelessly rating my own work. But really, please give criticism! I'm a newbie!

This novel makes the viewers ask questions, and this is a good thing! You want your viewer hooked and your doing exactly that! Good job! Though one more thing. There's a line that says, "Her sense of humor is sharp and often veers towards the dark side." It kind of irked me. I kind of want you to show more and tell less, maybe add an example to further the point? Nevertheless, good job. I'm proud of you son.

Thank you! It feels good to have some criticism and to see that people enjoy it!