Good adventures and new wild imaginations. But why do you stop writing? The story was good until you stopped writing. I love the part where the earth is connected by a chain but can you please explain more in that part. Also...the red knight, her development is not being emphasize on. I wish you could focus the story on her just like you did on Lucian
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Good adventures and new wild imaginations. But why do you stop writing? The story was good until you stopped writing. I love the part where the earth is connected by a chain but can you please explain more in that part. Also...the red knight, her development is not being emphasize on. I wish you could focus the story on her just like you did on Lucian
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Fantasy · Ilovebigsister