Most of all, your book needs a nice book cover to attract more people.
ch 0 1 CH 1 - Age of Mana
Fantasy · DnB4ever
I skimmed it and it seems to be an interesting novel
ch 0 1 CH 1 - Age of Mana
Fantasy · DnB4ever
Not a bad plot to be honest. Good job
ch 0 2 Georgia with Doctor
Sci-fi · Hena_Saha_3762
Apart from the literary words, I like the idea and dialogues in this novel.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: The Impish Laughter Of Pranks and Wisdom
Fantasy · MrXSoulDark
I like the way you write this story. The atmosphere of the story is very well described.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The Veil Awakens: Moonlit Transformations
Fantasy · MrXSoulDark
I feel pity for Angel. anyway this seems to be an interesting novel. I'll the rest of it later.