pretty solid. could be better but I don't know what it needs to be better. pretty average solid read there isn't much else to say. I liked it
i kinda wish the powers of the group weren’t explained here but instead explained through action, but this is still fine
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Action · officialknight
Im only a few chapters in, and it has impressed me. The writing is solid and the protagonist and their powers seem interesting enouogh to keep me invested. I think the strength of the writing is in its environment. Overall, I'm excited to see where it goes from here.
i wish i knew what it was but I cant seem to put my finger on it either. i hope you can discover the missing piece of this puzzle
Miss Beautiful C.E.O and her system
LGBT+ · PraiseElune