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I finished reading some chapters and I must say it's hateful. He spends the first chapters talking to the system and arguing with himself about how to travel to the multiverse, copy abilities, and become overpowered. He doesn't even explore the first world and he's already off to another one. The interaction with the world is poor, and the dialogues are bad. I didn't like it.

The fanfic is really good, the writing is enjoyable, and the characters' actions are consistent with their personalities, which is quite entertaining. I would like to know the name of the work, but keep up the good tradition

I'm 30 chapters in, and honestly, I don't understand much. You should remove the 'smut' tag because there's nothing like that in the story. I feel deceived

If you enjoyed the work, you can search for it on FanFiction as 'The Last Prayer' by GraeFoxx. 116 chapters here are equivalent to 15 on FanFiction. I'm not sure if they are plagiarizing it, but it's better to verify it in the place with the longest history

It seems like this is plagiarism, just that it's much more divided. I found it under the title 'The Last Prayer.' The difference is that this one is divided into many more parts; in the fanfiction, 116 chapters are equivalent to about 16. It's sad, and here I am giving away my power stones

I finished the first 50 chapters, and I have to say it's a pretty good fanfic. I like the interaction of the characters and their reactions, something that many fanfics tend to fail at by making everyone seem like robots; this is not the case. I didn't have much confidence at first because of the diaries, but it turned out to be quite entertaining. Keep up the good work."

I want to share my opinion about the first 35 chapters. Frankly, I didn't like it, especially at the beginning with Izuku's backstory. They tried to create a tragic background with beatings and parental abandonment, but the execution was quite poor. The dialogues feel artificial; it seems there are only two facets for people: either they pity him or they hate him. However, the most disappointing aspect is how, after trying to end his life and awakening his abilities, he suddenly becomes some kind of supreme being. Nobody questions him, nobody challenges him. When he visits the lower districts in search of information and deals with a merchant, he completely lacks respect and the villain does not defend himself; he even ends up being his secretary because, according to him, he sounds intelligent even though the dialogues are lamentable. The way they try to justify the lack of response from other characters is shameful. It seems that everyone, except me, is stupid. Even 'All for One', who initially is presented as a formidable villain, becomes someone complacent no matter what he says, no matter how disrespectful he is, he will do nothing; he even reveals that he is the son of his enemy but he just says you're interesting, take whatever you want. Anyway, good luck to those who decide to delve into this reading.

Hmm, I didn't like it. I know it's an adult story and I shouldn't have expected much, but it became incoherent when it had Tashigi kill Smoker. I think there was little interest in developing the intentions, resorting to saying anything and getting to the point of killing regardless of who

I took my time to reflect on whether I should read this or not. To start with, it's a fanfic of the Tachibana Family manga and NTR novel that has caused traumas to many people, but overall, if you remove the beach part, it's quite good. Now, people judge the three women quite harshly, and depending on the manga or light novel version, they may be right or not. In the light novel, the same thing happens as in the manga until they reach the beach. The difference lies in that in the novel, which is darker so to speak, Tachibana is the only one who gets pregnant, 'supposedly' with Yuu's child. In addition to that, they all remain slaves to the beach guys. In the manga, the three end up pregnant and have abortions. In addition to that, Tachibana helps the authorities find and imprison them, with an open ending as Yuu knows that Tachibana slept with another but decides to leave the sexual part to become a better man for them. This is my personal thought. While in the light novel it is indeed NTR, we must remember that what happened at the beach was under the influence of many aphrodisiac drugs and blackmail. In the end, they become their long-term slaves. In the manga, they cut off contact after the beach, except for Tachibana, who works with the authorities to lock them up and keep them away from their daughters. So, more than labeling it as NTR, it is rape. I guess if you don't include the beach part, it could be a good fanfic. I haven't read a single chapter of the fanfic, but I give you 5 stars for now

I've never liked the idea of someone who cheats on their partner being capable of sacrificing for them; it seems foolish to me, something that unfortunately could be real. But setting aside my personal thoughts, this story is really good. I like its writing and I like the main character, but something I would appreciate are reference images. I don't recognize where several of the characters are from. Keep up the good work.

I just read about 30 chapters, and this is my initial review. I don't like the system, or rather Nigel. I don't know who the real protagonist is, Nigel or Harry? Nigel guides him at an exaggerated level. For example, 'Well, Harry, let's manipulate your aunt,' or 'Harry, your aunt is sensitive, you need to say some nice words to deliver the final blow.' That's not guidance; it's manipulation. It could be called 'Reincarnation as the Harry Potter system' since it acts like an independent person with knowledge of HP. Also, why is it called a technological system if it doesn't bring any technology? Finally, the pace is too slow in my opinion. I'm not trying to offend anyone. Have a good day.

I always read the first 5 chapters to write a review. Now, my thoughts are that I see some flaws. For example, why is he an airbending master? Why does nobody care that he's an airbending master? Seriously, an airbending master appears and nobody wonders where he came from? All he does is say 'come, I'll train you' without any questions. Also, it seems like the story is following the script of the entire series step by step for now. Well, that could change; I only read the first 5. The main character is just a spectator; he doesn't change the events. Hmm, I don't know what good thing to say.

I don't want to sound unpleasant, but why don't we change the Chinese names? It's difficult for me every time he says "Chu Chen." Wouldn't it be better to change it since you're doing the translation? As for the content of the story, I can't say much, to be honest.

I really liked the story. At first, I didn't understand why things were done a certain way, but then everything fit together magnificently. I like how you write the dialogues; they don't feel forced. I recommend it, keep up the good work.

I don't understand why there is so much hatred towards chapters 18 and 19. This is a fanfic, and the author has the right to write as they please. However, the world seems to demand the same thing that has been seen in a thousand other fanfics: Deku with a super broken system and a harem. Personally, I enjoy the story and I like the way the author writes. I would like to see how the plot continues.