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What would happen if Izuku tried to commit suicide after being bullied and neglected by the people he loved.
But he didn't die, he awakened a quirk, a quirk so powerful that it wouldn't be wrong to say it is the strongest quirk ever.
Now with a Cynical and Psychopathic personality, he is out for blood, and shake the very foundation of hero society.
Stick around to find out what he does and how he does.
This is my first time writing a fic, so I am open to constrictive criticism, and would love to know the areas where I can improve myself, while also would love to know what you like about my fic, so that i can work to improve it so that it becomes identity of my fics through which people can find out that these are my fics
NOTE:- THIS IS AU... DON'T TRY TO COMPARE IT TO THE CANON...ANY CHARACTERS DIFFERENT FROM CANON ARE DONE BASED ON CREATIVE LIBERTY...AND I HAVE NO INTEREST IN TOLERATING ANYONE WHO WISHES TO COMPARE THEM TO CANON
WARNING:- IT CONTAINS LOTS OF GORE, VIOLENCE, RAPE, AND ALL OTHER SORTS OF EXTREME DARK SHIT, SO READ IT AT YOUR OWN DISCRETION, AND THIS FIC IS A REALISTIC FIC AND WILL ALSO HIGHTLIGHT THE REALITY OF THE SOCIETY SO THIS FIC IS NOT FOR FAINT OF HEARTS.
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Im glad thare are still people who just like me see this fact of how much of the great threat Izuku as a Vilian is to everyone in they world.
I gotta say I’m very impressed by this storyline and how you managed to implement a good amount of the characters and their personalities in each chapter. I’m looking forward to future chapters and hope you don’t drop this.👍
great concept, we're still really early on but it has lots of potential.the grammar could be improved, but it's not necessarily bad and you could do with better exposition and find a better way to get point across.
I want to share my opinion about the first 35 chapters. Frankly, I didn't like it, especially at the beginning with Izuku's backstory. They tried to create a tragic background with beatings and parental abandonment, but the execution was quite poor. The dialogues feel artificial; it seems there are only two facets for people: either they pity him or they hate him. However, the most disappointing aspect is how, after trying to end his life and awakening his abilities, he suddenly becomes some kind of supreme being. Nobody questions him, nobody challenges him. When he visits the lower districts in search of information and deals with a merchant, he completely lacks respect and the villain does not defend himself; he even ends up being his secretary because, according to him, he sounds intelligent even though the dialogues are lamentable. The way they try to justify the lack of response from other characters is shameful. It seems that everyone, except me, is stupid. Even 'All for One', who initially is presented as a formidable villain, becomes someone complacent no matter what he says, no matter how disrespectful he is, he will do nothing; he even reveals that he is the son of his enemy but he just says you're interesting, take whatever you want. Anyway, good luck to those who decide to delve into this reading.
only thing i can say is that is a really good concept, just a bad execution with loopholes and forced scenario
Ahhh, it's frustrating that the hype that the author gives off falls flat when reading the FF. The grammar is decent but the sentence structure feels childish. Plus as others say, the MCs bad treatment seems fake. Its like your average FF with bland writing, although the idea is good. It's not a dumpster fire but the hole revenge feels like deku is whining about life.
this is somehow worse than the story about the masochist fish. How do you make a story this boring? No seriously, teach me your wise ways on how to give myself a brain aneurysm. I had to skip through half of the dialogue cause of the cringe. truly someone needs to give you an award
Yeah… I’m gonna ask that you edit the early chapters so they aren’t blatantly copied. Especially in the parts where they don’t really fit. If you need more inspiration, twin Izuku fics are pretty common over on Wattpad. That said, I do like the direction you branched it off into. Less psycho more analyst. The romance options so far are also interesting.
Great writing, both dark yet not too edgy, with a hint of some big events as well. Can't wait for this to peak.
Very interesting story, i like your writing and how plot is done, And i hope Yoyorozu Momowill join to his side. Momo in bikini pic for you as my thanks for the story.
A shameless 5 star review for myself, because why not, the reason I gave myself 5 star review is because I believe even if my story isn't 5 star right now, but by the end of this fic, I am sure, I will be worthy of not just mine but all of your's 5 star reviews. There are bound to be many mistakes, and plotholes, but lets be realistic, even the original story has many mistakes that's why we are hear reading fanfics, so I'll just strive to be better by ever chapter
Okay so I have read many mha fanfics . This has the potential to be really good . Author has chosen a very good timeline , the world building is immaculate . The only issue i have is that you keep repeating words, ideas or concepts ... like saying the same thing in three different ways in the same sentence . I don't know if that's to increase the word count but it really makes me uncomfortable to keep reading the same thing . The pacing could be increased , it's not important to describe each and everyones thoughts and actions . Other than that keep up the good work 👍
This is a very great novel, I beg you 🙏🙏to continue until the end😭😭😭😭👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍...................,............
New Review, i like this story very much, whare all bs Izuku went throut all his life is know by everyone.
This is a very good MHA fanfic. Even though I don't like Deku, I can see this Deku becoming a bigger threat than all For One.
сколько мусора я прочитал...но у этой работы есть "выделение" Грамматику можно улучшить,но если это первая работа,то я прощаю. Надеюсь,я не ошибаюсь.....УДАЧИ
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Okay, I read about 10 chapters, and that's really bad and I'll tell you why. The writing lacks emotion, Izuku is constantly defeated in this story and my reaction is: ok, when will the cool part come? Everything is a bit robotic, the monologues and internal dialogues are boring and superficial. The writing is bad, with a lack of punctuation and no "" in the dialogue, I can only guess what a line is or isn't and who it belongs to. There are a lot of flashabcaks that don't interest me. The characters are evil for no apparent reason, like, All Might didn't have a quirk so he would never neglect someone without a quirk, I would even accept him being an absent father, you know? Inko too, in the beginning it was clear that she loved and cared for Izuku and then she just neglected him for no apparent reason? I know that a villain needs a tragic past but you need to know how to do that. Unless someone says that some kind of invisibility quirk was cast on Izuku, I wouldn't believe any kind of explanation. Anyway, I don't want to be an idiot, I'm just doing an honest review of what I found and raising points that can be improved in the future, I didn't get very far in this fanfic so I don't know if the writing has improved or anything, but if it has, the author should review the beginning of the story.
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