Nile_Versi_33

I hope the author continues writing the book to the end and I thank him deeply, I'm currently in ch 177 and the journey till now was mostly satisfying. The pace is perfect for me as he is not lingering too long at a level for me to be bored and hope he evolves quicker, but also doesn't evolve too quickly and let me actually savor the taste of each level. The mc's journey itself is very satisfying, the side characters though not so much, don't get me wrong, the characters by themselves are very interesting, they have their own: problems, personality, powers and struggles, which is really cool as most web novels barely go with the side characters more than their name, the problem is that even though they have all what I just said which means the author doesn't neglect them, I don't think they have been done justice, the author focuses way more than needed on the mother and sister, which okay, I get it that the mc needs his anchor but still for me it have become a little annoying, and I especially hate Vesha god she is annoying, objectively speaking she isn't bad as a character and is fairly well written, but it's just a personal beed with her, the second she appeared in the story I hated her😂😂, but the author focuses on her and leaves the actually interesting characters (in my opinion of course) heavily in the background like Eren, Selena, and the mc's best friend that I forgot his name which indicates how bad the situation is. Lastly another thing that frustrates me is that according to the web novel's description the mc is regaining his past self: a ruthless man who kills without mercy and all of that, but till now I didn't see any of that stuff, but tbh I understand that he is regaining his past self step by step and that he doesn't even want to regain it in the first place, so I understand it, it's just frustrates me, but I do understand it. I want to thank the author again for the effort and I will continue reading and savour the story.

So I just started volume 2 and I wanted to know if Nathan will continue with the name Samael (or sth like that) or will he use his past name again plus will he return his white hair or will he continue with black?

So I like this book very much, it feels different even though the idea and concept aren't new, it feels unique, the writing quality is very very very good, everything is explained well and detailed, there are no plot holes till now, the characters are very well written, no fl is like the other and each of them feels unique. the 18+ scenes are very very well written, honestly I'm shocked, till now this is the best 18+ scenes in a web novel I found in any web novel, and I do read a lot of this stuff so this says a lot. Though there are few things I didn't like, first I feel that the 18+ scenes are very much, don't get me wrong I like them and all but how can the mc become stronger and advance in strength when all he does is having sex, the story is very slow paced in my opinion like I finished the first volume and about 10 chapters of the second novel yet he is basically still at the same strength, sure he became stronger and all but not to the degree that I wished for and certainly not to the degree of what over hundred and fifty chapters should offer. In any case I'm going to continue reading this and I thank the author deeply, and I don't mean any offence or hate and I just said what I felt could be better in my opinion and I don't intend to hate.

I like this novel very much as it's very my type, the mc does all what he needs to become stronger which I truly like as that is a world which people eat each others for profit and unlike the other novels that make it about friendship and how to become stronger with your friends along the way and how the important thing is your family and friends and bla bla bla, this novel actually makes it realistic to read. Many things that I didn't like earlier or felt it was childish from the mc and the author didn't write him well, after reading the Auxiliary chapter everything fitted together, so if you thought that the mc is childish and does things that even though it has no benefits and in fact very dumb to do that, just read the auxiliary chapter and you will understand the mc journey. The Auxiliary chapter is very important to know what to expect from this novel!!!! I won't proclaim that this novel is perfect but personally I truly liked it that the little problems I noticed didn't bother me a lot, though I could say that I would the mc would utilise his system more as I feel that he yet doesn't use it to its full potential, and the mc description isn't really good as I can't really visualise what he looks like, and the writing some times feel childish (it didn't happen much barely twice or thrice, and I didn't mean the mc I meant the writing in general) but this is just constructive criticism and I don't mean any offence. in any case I thank the author deeply and if I may be greedy to ask for more chapters than seven per week 😂😂

So I'm currently in chapter 22 or sth, the story is very good, different from my usual picks which I do like as I feel it's unique, till now it gives me a little slice of life vibes (not sure if it's in the book's genre or not) but so far I like it, though there are 2 thing that I didn't, first is the character's description, I feel the description is very poor and especially the mc I can't really imagine how he looks tbh, and even the descriptions of the fls I feel could have lot more work. The second thing that I won't say I don't like but also feel a little lacking are the 18+ scenes, I feel it's writing is a little poor and like the character's descriptions I feel it's lacking and could use a lot of work. As for the world building I'm literally still in the very early chapters so I can't really comment on that, plus it's not like it's a fighting and overpowered mc type of novel that fights everyone In any case I really like the book and until now I'm planning to continue reading it, the idea feels a little fresh and I like that it's an 18+ focused book. I didn't mean to criticise the author or anything, I was just expressing my opinion and the things that I feel could be a little better and I don't mean any hate or offence.

So usually I don't post a review this early since I'm currently in ch 37 and I'm afraid to give this a bad rating only to like it later but I really can't handle the writing till now, and I am criticizing respectfully as I don't mean any hate or offence. I feel the story is forced and the advancement of it isn't smooth, also when introducing the characters, the introductions are bland and leave holes in the description, also the mispronounce as introducing the characters as a she only to be later revealed that she is actually a he and misusing his and her also annoy me, the dialogues are bland and the characters are shallow, I don't like the mother and the sister, they annoy me and I feel that their conversation with the mc is completely useless and utterly annoying. overall I just want to know if the writing quality will get better later on or not, because currently it's so hard for my eyes and brain to actually continue reading this, if it will continue like that, then this just means this story isn't for me, judging from the good reviews and many people like it then the problem is most probably with me. anyway thanks to the author and I don't mean to hate, if I said anything offensive or stupid then I apologise and keep up the good work.

I like this novel very much, I literally finished all the current chapters (433 if I remember correctly) in 2 days, I am so into it, however there are things that I didn't like but I didn't want to give this any lower review than five stars so I will just type what I feel is bad or I feel that it needs improvements (of course I thank the author deeply and I'm just giving a healthy criticize respectfully) the story feels a little too fast paced, I mean all that events in that short time no matter how strong the mc is, it just doesn't make much sense, and when introduced a new character especially the female interests I feel the descriptions a little lacking and I kinds fill the hole in my mind every time they appear differently. The story is perfect honestly but the best thing in it in my opinion, is the fact that even though the mc is op he still has limitations, even though he can now kill most if not all the C rank beings I still like that it isn't an easy victory and even his poison is useful when it's needed and not too much of a cheat that makes the story boring. Overall I thank the author for his effort and I hope the story continues at this pace. (tbh I'm not sure if this spoiler or not but because I mentioned poison I decided to play it safe and say spoiler)