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Yakub_Taran
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Same as skin. It made from steel.
"Father, I encountered something very terrifying today," I said. "It was a woman with steel skin, the same wings instead of arms and paws instead of legs."
The Flesh Mage: Another World
Fantasy · Yakub_Taran
Thaks for feedback. Encounter with nun was edited, so now you can re-read it to gain better experience.
ch 0 3 Defenders (edited)
The Flesh Mage: Another World
Fantasy · Yakub_Taran
Thank you! It was a good clarification.
Entering the main building of the church, I noticed the stained glass windows that symbolized the creation of this world.
The Flesh Mage: Another World
Fantasy · Yakub_Taran
to tout = to sell or advertise something.touts = sellers, merchants.
When we started to leave these slums, the view was decorated with more or less neat two-story houses, the atmosphere of trade reigned throughout the local quarter. Touts were heard advertising their goods, the smell of delicious food came from all over the place, stalls and shops were everywhere.
The Flesh Mage: Another World
Fantasy · Yakub_Taran
Thanks for the feedback! Too bad you didn't like the first fight. And no, the MC is incapable of it because of his soul issues.
ch 0 1 Another World
The Flesh Mage: Another World
Fantasy · Yakub_Taran
Hi everyone, just want to leave a little analysis of my work, including the setting and the main character. 1: What the book is about. It's about a transmigrant with an idiotic name that was chosen for him by the System, which absolutely hates the MC. His name, by the way, is Assreal. Among other things, Assreal has an ability – Failures surround me, – that guarantees Assreal a mountain of trouble. 2: What kind of guy is Assreal? He's an ordinary student, combining work and studies, who had the misfortune to die young and partially lose his memory. He was never an optimist, but after his death he lost all faith in a bright future and to save his sanity he resorts to humor and irony. His main goal is to survive, and the rest will come later. 3: Will there be romance? Probably not. 4: Will Assreal be able to get rid of the System? Yes, but closer to the end. 5: Why is his name Assreal? Will he change his name to a normal one? His name is closely tied to the System's decision to mock him and yes, he will change his name, but only when he gets his memories of the past back, which is a long process. 6: How often will chapters be released? For now it's 1 chapter/day.
My System of Misfortune in the Absurd Fantasy World
Fantasy · Yakub_Taran