Author of Destiny's Shadows: To the End of All Beginnings
2023-10-25 Joined Global
Interesting start to the story. I really like the pacing so far. Very vivid, and the descriptions for the world and characters have been perfect, it's very easy to imagine the scenes. Really like the MC too, she already seems fun, despite living a tragic life. Gonna keep reading this fr
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: "The Wrath of gods"
Fantasy · FryingDragoon
Kind of yes hehe, but good morning to them would be something like a very surprised term for us
Now, any normal vampire would not say "good morning", for very obvious reasons. Which is why when one says it, it is with the intention of having conveyed something so mind blowing and so unbelievably good, that it enters the realm of impossibility.
Fantasy · Cinna_4
Just read the official first chapter, and quite enjoyed it. Really interested to see the future dynamics between the new friends, especially with stories with young kids as main characters. I can see a lot of potential in terms of development and growth. I didn't read the info and lore dump, but when I scanned through it, I saw a lot of information and shifts in the world throughout the course of history. I find that to be very impressive, though I wanna keep myself in the dark longer and keep reading with more mystery unraveled.
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For sure, I'll keep reading your work. I have faith that you'll be able to continue it really well[img=recommend]
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Caught up immediately. Quite an interesting start to a story. Good usage of language, very diverse vocabulary as well. I am curious as to how the world would expand more, and the quests the characters would go to, and their developments. Can't say much as of now, too much is a mystery as of now, and since chapters are short and a faster paced than the average novels. But I'll wait for the story to progress further before giving a concrete objective take.
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Already an intense start to the novel. The worldbuilding is very interesting, especially the visuals of the story. The world background is very vivid and is described in such a way that would be easy to imagine for the readers. Definitely looking forward to the development of the characters and plot progression.
Surviving the Deadliest Magic Academy
Fantasy · Gardbet