Webnovel Author: GeorginaFaraway - Novel Collection

Nice job guy! You convey very well that we are in the same game, I love bracket displays, so this part is something brilliant and exciting and I have never come across anything like it. So you are clever and this is all excellent! However... I think more information could be added about Aizen, what kind of person he is, how he lives, okay, we saw his mother and what he writes in the messenger group, but I also want to know more about this guy (however, he liked the way he kills in the game ... wow, what about a school shooting... damn that wasn't funny) so overall a great story, I'd like more character attention.