Please leave comments on how I can improve or better this novel! I am trying to learn how to write better and make this story come to life <3
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Thank you for the tip! I will try and fix that, I appreciate the feedback a lot!
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Please leave comments on how I can improve or better this novel! I am trying to learn how to write better and make this story come to life <3
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