Thanks for your feedback! I'll consider your suggestion and see how I can adjust the language style to better fit the overall atmosphere of the story. Hope you continue to support and enjoy the upcoming chapters!
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Thanks for your feedback! I'll consider your suggestion and see how I can adjust the language style to better fit the overall atmosphere of the story. Hope you continue to support and enjoy the upcoming chapters!
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I've made the changes, thank you for your comment. Please let me know if there are any other areas that need improvement.
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I've made the changes, thank you for your comment. Please let me know if there are any other areas that need improvement.
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Thank you, I've made the changes.
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This granny isn't exactly the most reliable, and Mc is worried she might take possession.
Ethan grinned, "Just dropped off a sealed weapon at Granny Quinn's over at Psychic Sanctuary 12, asked her to check it out. Oh, and I forgot to ask when I can pick it up. Mr. John, could you check on that when you do your rounds?"
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Thank you, I've made the changes.
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The novel has Romance and Harem, but no Yuri or NTR.
Thank you very much for pointing out the issue; I have made the necessary revisions. I greatly appreciate your feedback.
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Thank you very much for pointing out the issue; I have made the necessary revisions. I greatly appreciate your feedback.
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Thank you so much for your feedback! If possible, I hope you can rate my book, and please feel free to point out any areas for improvement.
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Thank you so much for your feedback! If possible, I hope you can rate my book, and please feel free to point out any areas for improvement.
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Thank you so much for your feedback! If possible, I hope you can rate my book, and please feel free to point out any areas for improvement.
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Thank you so much for your feedback! If possible, I hope you can rate my book, and please feel free to point out any areas for improvement.
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Let me give you the lowdown on my book. It's set in a world where tech and cultivation exist side by side. The MC's golden ticket is this Cultivation Family Simulator, where the more he helps his descendants, the stronger they get, and the more feedback they can give him. Feel free to call out anything that doesn't sit right. Let's all watch as the MC and his descendants level up together.
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Thank you for your suggestion. I have made the modifications.
ch 17 Chapter 17: Take down this jerk
My Descendants Are My Power
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