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No

ch 27 Chapter Twenty Five: Extra Hand

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It's a good read honestly, the goal seems simple but the journey is entertaining. But i do think that there are far too much action, it would do much good to have more quieter moments in between all the stuff

ch 26 Author's Note:

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ch 25 Chapter Twenty Four: Tanks

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oh, that one.

"I go to %&@*$ elementary, how about you?"

Spider-Man Mayhem

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ch 22 Chapter Twenty One: Before The Crash (Part III)

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Thanks for the chapter!

ch 54 54 Whereabouts

Naruto: A Different Power

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Sugar

ch 19 Chapter Eighteen: Rest

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Love

ch 18 Chapter Seventeen: The Battle (Part II)

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Disagree

ch 17 Chapter Sixteen: The Battle (Part I)

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No, but who said I woke up?

ch 16 Chapter Fifteen: The Black Pit

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I Gotta Feeling from Black Eyed Peas

ch 15 Chapter Fourteen: The Axoatl

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Hey baby, If you were a transformer, you'd be Optimus Fine.

ch 13 Chapter Twelve: The Gumo Heika (Part II)

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The writing is pretty good.The story is actually well developed.the character design is... Noice. Alan Walker is somewhat interesting too.And it implements the MCU pretty well. So, overall: 4.2