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Zahra_Grandis
female LV 2My ex. manager told me that I was super random in person Twitter: @Zahra_Grandis
2023-12-19 Joined IndonesiaBadges 4
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In the dark and mysterious depths beneath the earth's surface, lies a mud lake inside of an underground cave enclosing an unfathomable depth. The atmosphere inside the cave was filled with silence that was only broken by the gurgling water, flowing from the stalactites and stalagmites. Protruding from the ceiling and bottom of the cave and the echo of my cries for help.
I Was Planning to Find My Alpha But He's Too Annoying!
Fantasy · Zahra_Grandis
Macbeth, Act 5, Scene 5
Aboron: The Elusive World of Adventure
Fantasy · Mashuk_Musafir23
I see... that happened to me when I used bold on mine :"(
But his mind was saying something else. “What beautiful Black hair, hazel eyes, and long, dark eyebrows and lashes! What a cute-looking boy! Shit! What the fuck am I thinking?”
Aboron: The Elusive World of Adventure
Fantasy · Mashuk_Musafir23
I think it would be better to use (' ') for monologue instead of ("") and make it clear that it's his thoughts to make it easier for readers to distinguish between a monologue and a dialogue :D
But his mind was saying something else. “What beautiful Black hair, hazel eyes, and long, dark eyebrows and lashes! What a cute-looking boy! Shit! What the fuck am I thinking?”
Aboron: The Elusive World of Adventure
Fantasy · Mashuk_Musafir23
agree
ch 15 Chapter Fifteen: Calla Lily
Welcoming the Chaos
Fantasy · Nacho4U
I hope he's not under the influence of her powers.
She responded, "I am the Mistress of Shadows. My power lies in manipulation, mind control, and mind reading using astral energies."
Astral Prodigy: The Reincarnated Genius in the Shadows
Fantasy · Ranch64
Confused by the frozen demon, I looked around to find Nyx standing before me. The glow of her form radiated with an otherworldly intensity. She spoke with a voice that echoed through the Astral Realm, "Let's form a contract."
Astral Prodigy: The Reincarnated Genius in the Shadows
Fantasy · Ranch64
I told you LOL
So, he is a tsundere.
Astral Prodigy: The Reincarnated Genius in the Shadows
Fantasy · Ranch64
You're so lucky to have Sir Gareth by your side. The type of tsundere, I like him LOL
Unexpectedly, Sir Gareth pulled me aside, placing a protective bracelet on my wrist. He seriously said, "This is a high-level artifact. It will create a barrier around you when someone attacks you. This will keep you safe."
Astral Prodigy: The Reincarnated Genius in the Shadows
Fantasy · Ranch64
Dad looked at me with a mocking expression, his thick, whitened eyebrows lifting and bringing out the wrinkles on his forehead. From the look on his face, it looked like he was saying, 'Am I right?'
I Was Planning to Find My Alpha But He's Too Annoying!
Fantasy · Zahra_Grandis
I think it's a good story, a lot of things I have learned from it. The plot is good and I like how the author used references. Keep writing, I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
Aboron: The Elusive World of Adventure
Fantasy · Mashuk_Musafir23