The transition between characters was well done.
ch 0 2 2 — Out of The Forest
Fantasy · Aphrodiitewritess
Entertaining first chapter and the quality of writing is good too!
ch 0 1 1 — Arrested ?
Fantasy · Aphrodiitewritess
Thank you so much for your feedback! Chapters 7 and 8 have significant developments in this area as well. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. It's a true labor of love, and your positive response fuels my passion for writing it.
Her words caught me off guard, leaving me momentarily speechless. "Daughter? But I'm a man," I protested, my voice tinged with confusion.
Fantasy · Islorae
Thank you! A lot of rewriting and editing. This is iteration 3 of this particular chapter!
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Fantasy · Islorae
I really enjoyed how you ended this chapter with the realization that the main character keeps dying.
ch 0 7 Day 001: .03 (1/3)
LGBT+ · black_simon3
I assume this priest doesn't work for the big guy upstairs. I love the instant suspense.
ch 0 3 D e a r M e m o r y 1,
LGBT+ · black_simon3
Shameless Author Review. This is a story I am crafting for my own pleasure. I do hope everyone enjoys this wonderful ride with me! This story takes pieces of everything that I enjoy in a good story and combine it into something that hopes to give us a wild ride while exploring what it means to be 'normal'
Feyborne Chronicles
Fantasy · Islorae