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The storytelling is great. The drama is on and it gives interest to readers to continue reading to know what will happen next.
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I read the first ten chapters and their scenes are okay, however the writing style especially on technicalities needs improvement.
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The length of each chapter is fine, no worries.
Liked this kind of scene
Darica listened speechlessly as Yuka practically scolded and chided her as if she was a child.
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Not so fast, my dear 馃樅
[DUKE: You know that my feelings for you are genuine, alright? I will never mess with a girl like you. You rock my world. Can't you give me a child?]
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What a good perk! 馃槉鈾狅笍
As the last people to enter the bus, Darica, and the gang didn't need to worry about not finding space, for there was always vacant space left for them by default.
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馃樁
And now, she was a happy influencer who was very happy to show some skin as long as people were willing to pay for it.
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Clubs are sometimes slightly off. I wish my school had more responsible officers and interesting events.
"If your club idea is reasonable and feasible, you might have a chance of getting that club opened. I also recommend you to only bring forward good ideas and all nonsensical ideas. I would hate to see them. Don't play with the council's minds or else I will have you blacklisted and you guys wouldn't want that."
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I can relate with this 馃槄
Everyone was dying to go home and have a breather, so the sooner she was done, the better it was for everyone as well.
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I can remember these vibes, how I missed my high school days.
And when it wasn't supporting, it was there to just give the students updates on the current affairs.
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Love this one.
This was the good thing regarding Peach's page. It was a gossip channel that mainly focused on Grandview University's students. However, instead of dragging anyone down, it was mostly there to just support.
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The anger is smoking habaneros! 馃サ
"I know you are in there, you little dimwit! How dare you frame him repeatedly?" that woman's voice sounded throughout in anger.
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I am happy and surprised that you mentioned the Philippines in your first chapter 'coz I am from that county. I hope you put more emphasis on that county and explore more. I just have comment on the chapters' length, I can say that those are shorts and I highly suggest to make it at least 1,500 words per chapter so that you can get the right benefits once you sign an exclusive contract and premium contract.Lastly, the story concept is great. It is good to read and interesting to readers.