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It was suppose to be a one night stand followed by her death but he saved her and that's where it had all began.
Emberline Stark, once the epitome of the perfect daughter, found herself in a twisted family game after her mother's sudden death. Despite her stepfamily's hatred, she cared for them as much as she could. However, everything changed when her stepsister, Aurora, stole her fiancé.
In the quest for revenge, Ember discovers that her fairytale world was far from simple. As she delves deeper, questions arise about her mother's disappearance and a mysterious connection with a bad play boy. Amidst the chaos, she faces a choice between the bad boy, her ex, and her first love.
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I am trying to stick to 1-2 Chapters a day. 1k words per chapter.
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I'm enjoying the story so far!! Wanna know what happens and how Ember and Zayn team up!! Plz keep updating !!
This novel is a fast-paced and engaging read that will keep you hooked from the first page to the last. The characters are well-developed and complex, each with their own motives and flaws. The plot is full of twists and turns, and the romance is hot and spicy. The author also explores the themes of family, loyalty, trust, and identity, and how they affect the choices and actions of the characters. If you are looking for a thrilling and passionate romance novel, you should definitely check out The Devil's Ember. Good job author!
As the story is still in its early stages, I can't say much more except that it's intriguing and it's being delivered well, by the author. The characters are likeable and the story is progressing nicely, so I wish you luck.
I love how you deliver the story. The main character is okay, acted so natural and showcased the feelings.The only problem is you never mentioned what is the name of the character having a 1st Person POV. It disconnects a connection with the readers.
Overall, the story is good and I will recommend it. I'll also write another review once the story progresses. But here is my preliminary comments: I like that the story starts in the climax right away, giving a sense of excitement, wanting me to read more. Although the story is still in its early parts, I would say that the progression is becoming more interesting. This is just a personal opinion, but I think the author needs to give more dept to her character, although maybe she would address it in the next chapters. The writing style is also good and easy to follow. Minimal grammatical and spelling mistakes.
Hey girlie, I just want to let you know you have an awesome story going on. I’m very interested and intrigued by the characters and the storyline and of course the plot. There are some ways you can write your narration between ember much more easier to understand. I felt that you use the correct words perfectly, but you put it in the wrong position so then it gets confusing. Some things that you interpret can be wordy like for example. When you mentioned about Ember’s dress, being drenched, and you said you were trying to relate that to goosebumps. Which you can, but instead of explaining that you can just say that she felt goosebumps. or continue the sentence and word it differently. You are a very good writer already, I really like your story and I want to continue reading it. But just a tip don’t kill yourself putting too many words to explain what you want for the readers. you are already doing such a good job, especially from your other novels. Lastly, I also rated your road background lower, but honestly there’s not enough chapters to show that, so please don’t take offense. I’m actually planning to come back and write your novel again once you have more chapters. (I promise it will be a shorter review 😂) I hope I was helpful to you have a wonderful day❤️