Webnovel Author: Soumajit_Gayen - Novel Collection

The starting was really good and the pacing is good as well.... but I noticed was the naming of the weapons.. I think you should pull from myths

The story is overall really interesting... the characters feel alive and their interactions seem real..... the pacing is slower than others... but I like it.. A lot... Expecting a lot from you story Zartex

Tbh, the concept is very innovative and world building is really great. the punctuations can use some work but other than that... It is a good read.....

Your story really interesting... to be honest it has a lot of potential... the grammar seems a bit rough now.. but I'm sure you'll improve it so, best of luck for your journey ✨️

A great read indeed.. But I think you should work just a little harder on your dialogues.. and it would be perfect

Hello guys, I'm the author of this Novel who is shamelessly leaving a 5 star review.. I really appreciate every new reader, I really do... My story has only began.. and it has a long way to go. You see, my dream is to make an anime. On the same level as Naruto. so please help me on this journey to achieve my dream... Thank you all 😄😄😊

The story seems really interesting.. The very idea of using a mental disorder as a kind of "awarness" really does intrigues ones mind. And I must say saying that Mustang Gt is not that expensive really snatched my attention. anyways goodluck on you journey bruv.. And to fellow readers... Give this one a go, And I assure you... You won't be disappointed. [img=recommend]