thanks good advice
ch 0 2 [author note]
Anime & Comics · Hunter_Smith_6632
hey man I'm new to this and I asked for constructive criticism not hate man so stop
ok my dad has decided to send me to Charles exavers boarding school until I'm old enough to inherit the company. right now I'm entering the school and i see charles waiting for me, I use my ability on him and copy his powers. hello young man do you know what you are, yes im a mutant, ahh great so I don't have to explain it to you then. Do you know what your mutant power is? no I don't well that's ok we'll figure it out, hey, what, I said that I don't know what it is but I do have an idea. ok what do you think it is then, well I can hear people thoughts but I can also control there minds so im not really sure what it is.
Anime & Comics · Hunter_Smith_6632
at least have toph
ch 0 4 Vote for love interest + Author Message + Should there be harem for this fic?
Anime & Comics · GhostyZ
dude get outta here man don't comment stuff like that you weirdo
ch 12 Status?
TV · KingSeyer
Alex is a guy who more or less goes with the flow so I really feel like that's what he would say
ch 0 2 chapter 2
TV · Hunter_Smith_6632
i know the chapter are short and that's why I'm gonna make a ton of them
ch 0 6 chapter 6
TV · Hunter_Smith_6632
I thank you for your comment i know i need to work on my world building and don't worry i will but I'm not able to partner up with other writers as i don't know how and I also don't know anyone and that is because I'm new
ch 0 5 chapter 5
TV · Hunter_Smith_6632
hey can you do one where somebody has the rinnegan and jjk
ch 75 Date
Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt
Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4