Thanks for the chapter.
ch 12 Evaluation
Eastern · MyLittleBrother
Just my personal opinion so far on writing this, it's mostly free of errors in the writing (5), I'll try posting at least 1 chapter a day (5), story development is being planned quite well (5), but the character design and world background is slightly lacking. I'll try working on those soon.
Fantasy · Voided_YT
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Webnovel 
Thanks for the chapter.
ch 12 Evaluation
Path to Dual Cultivation
Eastern · MyLittleBrother