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The matter did not stop except for some mistakes, but it only reached a stage where it is intended, except that the intelligence of the characters in the novel is of a naive style and it seems as if he is sarcastic and full of feelings, or he is trying to work on that, for example in Chapter 1.: He saw his grandfather bragging about his grandson’s talent in front of the competitor, then he sent his congratulations. to Chen and a big smile on his face. Even though he didn't show it, Qin Wei was very excited that he himself succeeded for the weak talent, so he gets an A grade in order to help Nima. I don't know the meaning of making Chen Wei's grandfather brag about the hero's talent. Your writing style makes others not take you as an example because you are a bad example. There is no ambiguity added by the book, which makes the reader bored of the reader. You make a sane adult man over 50 years old. Are you... She resembles him as a man with low intelligence. This type of person is naturally the one who keeps falling into the same hole, and then expects different results every time. For example, what if we said that it turns out that the hero’s talent is a C-grade talent instead of an A-grade talent in this matter, because Chen Wei's grandfather was the one who lost his face, and of course he is not stupid. Let's solve this writing error. I see, instead of deleting the words I wrote, it is better to add the part that Chen Wei's grandfather had some ideas of faking his talent for the hero of the novel, as he was thinking of faking it. His talent and adding this part will make the matter more logical and will build a good building block. Some mistakes do not stop until we reach a stage that forces us to reconsider our methods. Although intelligence and talents are important in life, using them incorrectly may lead to unexpected results. For example, when people show off their talents and try to show off, they may be like a donkey carrying books, only exposing themselves to ridicule and contempt.

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Writing a scenario in which the protagonist's fiancée is killed requires thinking about several elements and following certain steps to ensure the story's success and appeal. Here are some tips that can help you with this: 1. **Developing the characters of the killer and the victim**: Develop the characters of the hero and his fiancée in detail, including their personal qualities, the relationship between them, and how the event affects the development of their personalities. 2. **Build tension and suspense**: Gradually build tension and suspense throughout the story, increasing the shock and impact when the crime occurs. 3. **Provide clear motives**: Provide clear motives for the killer to explain why he committed the crime, whether it was the result of revenge, greed, jealousy, or other reasons. 4. **Choose the appropriate setting**: Choose the appropriate setting for the crime to occur, whether it is in an urban or rural environment, and under specific circumstances that contribute to the complexity of matters. 5. **Focus on the psychological impact and emotions**: Write in detail about the psychological impact and emotions that the hero faces after committing the crime, and how this affects his life and his relationship with others. 6. **The story develops naturally**: Make sure that the story develops naturally and convincingly, follows events in a logical way and moves the story forward. 7. **Use dialogue effectively**: Use dialogue effectively to clarify feelings and interactions between characters, and to present necessary information in a natural way. 8. **Attention to detail**: Pay attention to small details and detailed descriptions of scenes, which helps build the atmosphere and increase the realism of the story. 9. **Review of Consequences**: Write about the possible consequences of the crime and how it affects the lives of the characters and the surrounding community. 10. **Edit and Review**: Once you have finished writing the script, carefully edit and review it to ensure accuracy, smoothness, and consistency between events. By implementing these tips well, you can write an exciting and poignant scenario in which the protagonist's fiancée is murdered in a way that arouses curiosity and keeps readers riveted until the end.

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It is clear that the quality of the book is bad and does not compare to the level of the Mad Priest, and the events are accelerating. Although the Mad Priest’s novel is incomplete, it has reached 20 million words. The writer may be able to reach a higher ceiling, of course, but the level is disappointing and does not achieve the required level, unfortunately, in this book. The number of words in each chapter is very small and does not meet the standards, and the depth is not at the required level. Moreover, the writer, unfortunately, does not draw from things found in The Mad Priest within the novel. In theory, you wrote a novel adapted from a novel. You must quote at least some things in the novel, such as sayings. Or wisdom, or poetry, or tricks, or events, or characters, but you must adhere to some things related to the principles of the character, and I advise the author to pay close attention to some of the details, if he wants to change them, and if you want to change the character, it must begin gradually and not directly, in order to avoid any contradictions in the plot. To enable it to adapt, and usually the plot may collapse and the level of the novel will begin to decline, the plot in the novel usually collapses at the high point or climax, which is the stage in which tension and excitement reach their maximum levels, and a major turning point in the story is achieved. At this point, events escalate to an extreme, and the characters face great challenges or reveal important secrets, leading to a radical change in the situation or fate of the characters. After the climax, the story enters the decline phase, where events begin to calm down and recede, and the characters relieve tension and begin to settle matters and head toward the conclusion. The timing of a plot breakdown is affected by several factors, including the type and nature of the story, the writing style, and the writer's purpose for the novel. In some novels, a breakdown can be sudden and dramatic, while in others, it can be a natural development that falls within the progression of the story.

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