thegreen_Moss - Profile

Read quite the few open piece fan fics out there but this one is the among the better ones out there the character and his development is kinda crazy sometimes but it's manageable and world building itself is very intriguing.

The premise and setting of the story are good the character development my be a little exaggerated but overall it's good and the author's imagination is somewhat acceptable.

After reading so many Naruto fan fics this one Hits the spot. The character and his development feel reasonable the original plot isn't made too messy and the style of the characters is good.

Wasted time on this one, it's kinda too darks MC powers up too easily and it doesn't feel fun n games he's in the dark side while being in the light the development in later stages is very rushed

It's good and all until everything starts feeling happy go lucky, most of the important characters know the true identity then it makes it kinda cringe and I mean he can give some info, but who married who, who were the kids it feels kinda forced and you can't make every single ascept right ...