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Naruto: My Unique System

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Author: Cloe23

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Sakamoto Tatsuma found himself transmigrated as a war orphan in the world of Naruto, where he quickly realized his seemingly limited potential to become a ninja. Just as hope began to wane, an unexpected invitation arrived, inviting him to join the ninja academy, accompanied by a surprising sound. [Ding! The system has awakened!]

Upon careful experimentation, he discovered that his system bestowed him with attributes through challenging and defeating others, be it in training, consuming food, or engaging in games. Victory allowed him to continually enhance his potential and even extract unique talents from those around him! Space-time talent! Ninja Tool Throwing talent! Sensory Talent!

Gradually, the once seemingly untalented boy, destined for a bleak future, started unveiling boundless potential!
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SaishoMysteriarch

I happen to need more reviews under my belt to get an achievement and this has potential so might as well. No need to dance around it long story short, writing style. This story reads more like an academic paper than a fanfic and that is no complement. The words used are just way too sophisticated (accolades, tumultuous, etc). I'm not a native English speaker but I think that I have some pretty good vocabulary, so it's not often and even rare that I have to stop and Google what words mean. And this isn't just the way things are described in third person this also affects the way characters talk, kids shouldn't be talking the same way mediaeval scholars Flirt, no matter how mature they are or even if one of them is reincarnated (except if he came from mediaeval nobility in his past life), in general no one speaks like that, not in this world. This a naruto fic not the retelling of captain Holt's childhood. Okay past all of that let's leave this on a good note no need to leave a bad aftertaste. The Characters are pretty good so far (chapter 7) and the situations are genuinely funny. The system hasn't been shown too much yet but it's the first time I have seen one like it so that's always a plus. Overall a good story held back by the way it's written, I won't assume how you end up with this final product, but a last minute edit by hand to make it more natural will make some massive improvements. Just in general if it's not in a 13 year old's vocabulary it shouldn't be in the fic, at the very least not as often as it is now.

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cytwz
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a very interesting story, especially on the premise that he will be a kind of best friend to Minato (at least that's what I deduced) if he isn't, that's okay too. the protagonist also the design of my brother gintoki, one of the best protagonists.

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Jantipopo

ai is strong on this one ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚

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sakuraii

Great read so far

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wisdomkeeper

It was great so far, keep going i like the concept too

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ProfaneImmortal

As of ch. 80: decent enough writing, and a fresh plot. The characters have similar personalities to the original work. No romance yet. I recommend it.

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Hallowed666

Can't wait for more!

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ShriNG

tysm........................................................................................................................................................

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yrhusgjy

overall a decent read, though some of the wording throughout the earlier chapters feels awkward it has grown noticeably better as the story continues

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escobe
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Good.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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vinvenmazel

what's the Chinese Mtl name . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .?

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Ignox_Xongi

A good fan fic!!

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Sodeno_MZE

Interesting story. Will continue reading.

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Sceat
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Is this a work of translation? If yes, can you give its original name? Aaaaaรขjdjskskskskkskkdkfkfkjdjdkzjdjzjzjdkskskskdkdkskskdkdkkfkfkdkdkfkdkdk

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MMEStudio

Excellent cheat excellent MC Excellent writing quality the only downside is low chapter

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Maizy_Tiger

Estou gostando muito mais sรณ queria saber uma coisa vai ter romance? ...................................................................................

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fhjj_hysjsjs

great novel-------โ€---------------------

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kovaksens

Very promising and cool work [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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