You should make sure when a different character speaks, it’s within a new paragraph
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Vengeance
Fantasy · yerushelem
Capitalize all names!! And make sure the dialogue ends with quotation marks🙏🏿🙏🏿 Imma keep reading tho. See ya next chapter
ch 0 1 Chapter 1:Kill the king
Fantasy · yerushelem
I’m the author. Why would I write a bad review? That’s for y’all to decide. Just need this so it’s not empty
Arash: The Four Orbs
Fantasy · MR_Ethan