It's good, continue buddy... more... 馃榿馃榿
ch 0 5 Adventurers guild
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Thanks for the review 馃樃馃樃
No there is "He covered it" but I think it should be "It covered him" 馃槙
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No, there was "He covered it" but I think it should be "It covered him" 馃槙
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More... more... more...
ch 0 3 Evolution
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he was covered in it completely*
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It's 'I' not 'he'
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ten cents...?
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Oh...
[The host before dying managed to complete the first condition, which is to drop blood on the pendant he was wearing, forming a bond. Unfortunately, he only owned half of the pendant and, thanks to his death, his soul was transported to the body that currently has the second piece, so he is currently on another planet.]
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I will try to make her more tameable 馃槜
'I knew this time would come, just a single woman wouldn't be enough to satisfy his hunger. There will be many women around him, I need to prepare so I won't lose my son... I can't help but imagine what Nova will do when she realizes her little brother has already deflowered his mother and now was going for his aunt, she might go mad...'
Fantasy 路 Worthless_Wanderer
You will soon find out in coming chapters 馃槉
Failure: Devoured by unknown
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ch 35 I can't sit idly by... (Bonus chapter)
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I already did 馃ぃ, I am full fo energy now, but it won't be for a long while, I have college a few hours later 馃槶
ch 35 I can't sit idly by... (Bonus chapter)
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ch 35 I can't sit idly by... (Bonus chapter)
Fantasy 路 Worthless_Wanderer
ch 0 5 Adventurers guild
The way of the black dragon
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