Just a simple writer aiming to write a not so simple story
Nothing can make an auther more happy when someone comments about his work. Either it is hate or a honest review each and every comment gives me motivation to improve
Fantasy · Lunatic_player
I am very happy to have entered this world of novels I still need to work a lot and I will always try to fix my mistakes
Thank you I hope you will be reading and supporting me through my journey. Please if I have any mistakes in my story I would be truly happy if you point them out
Sure i will work on that
ch 0 1 A mischievous expedition
Hello fellow readers, I'm new to this writing troupe so you may find some things confusing and illogical. I hope you can point out that stuff so I can improve myself better every day. As a writer I would say nothing makes the writer more happier than someone pointing out his mistakes, it's like you gain a chance to improve every second. I will be sure to make this story one of the most interesting ones. I hope we can walk this journey together.
I am currently in chapter 6 The story is well narrated, I like how you use the vocabulary and carefully craft the scene. The fighting scenes are also good to visualize. I think a bit of work on world-building and introducing a new character in the next 5 chapters would be good.
Fantasy · the_Penguin
Please write a review if you want me to continue this work since I'm working on another project so I will think over how many replies I will get and then stick to that decision. Thank you for your valuable time dedicated to reading this 1 chapter if possible I am writing another story that is more interesting which you can go and check out its name is "Unlocked Divinity"
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Nothing can make an auther more happy when someone comments about his work. Either it is hate or a honest review each and every comment gives me motivation to improve
Unlocked Divinity
Fantasy · Lunatic_player