Reading this earlier attitude of Sunny’s again reminds me of how objectively garbage his entire character arc is on paper. Genuinely one of the most frustrating MC’s I’ve ever had to follow in a story.
Sunny hated both of them for different reasons. Harus embodied everything he despised: a servile shadow who did whatever his master ordered. Amon was worse in his eyes, a damned parasite who lived by leeching off others.
Shadow Slave: Error
Book&Literature · Luukkk
'Dude, we're in the middle of a conversation. What the fuck?'
Arcane Anew (Rewrite)
Video Games · Drunken_Sailor822
I didn’t. Drawing sadly isn’t a part of my skillset — Which means despite the fact I can visualise exactly how Callian is supposed to look, I can’t put that onto paper to share with you all.
And like clockwork the enemy jungle showed up for an easy kill. What's more, like a genius, Top decided to flash into the bushes. Now he was down both summoner spells, Flash and Teleport, on top of dying for a sixth time.
Arcane Anew (Rewrite)
Video Games · Drunken_Sailor822
On this site, unlike with most others, wish-fulfilment stories rule the top rankings. Writers who don’t confine themselves to this trope are scorned in favour of those who do - That’s just the way it is. That being said, the story you’ve written here is not only well-thought-out but also an outstanding read, meaning it’s something you should be proud of, no matter what your wider audience may say.
Throughout this process, I've faced a constant wave of criticism not thoughtful feedback but complaints driven by personal expectations and wish-fulfillment fantasies. Every chapter seemed to be met with comments like, "This should've happened," or "Why didn't you do this instead?" as if the story had to cater to everyone's individual desires rather than follow the narrative I was carefully building. It became exhausting.
Half Blood Prince [Harry Potter Fan Fiction]
Book&Literature · _Paradox
Customary 5/5 as per usual. I recommend reading up until at least chapter 10 before deciding whether to drop it or not as that’s when things really start to kick onto gear. Don’t let the earlier chapters discourage you!
If that’s the case are you adding Camacazi or keeping Astrid as her replacement like they did in the adaptation?
"Exactly!" Gobber smirked. "They're lookin' to strengthen ties with the Hairy Hooligans. Show off a bit o' peace and diplomacy in front of the other Highland clans."
The Exiled Prince Domination
Movies · PHONEIX_PRIMA
Agreed, there are far worse situations to be in. And yeah, he is ‘weak minded’ - for now at least.
Yup. Slowly but surely.
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original Arcane: Re-Painted Tapestries
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The world of Runterra is breaking. Those unsatisfied with the present and impending future have instead turned to the past, seeking salvation. An emissary of the present has been sent to the past, in the hopes of preparing the world for its impending destruction. But this emissary has his own agenda. And he will see it fulfilled, no matter the cost. * An Arcane AU. *Rewrite in progress16 Chs 741 Collections
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HP: Shattered glass
Artemis isn’t strong, and he isn’t free. So, he takes the easy way out and leaves this world of his own volition. He then wakes in another, freer than ever; but still irrevocably caged. * Do not read if you are not comfortable with gore or other trauma-inducing topics. * A tale told in the world of Harry Potter (AU)18 Chs 46 Collections
Give him a redemption arc with actual character growth and you’ll have beaten G3’s version by miles. His character deserves some love, make it happen 🙏
Sunny hated both of them for different reasons. Harus embodied everything he despised: a servile shadow who did whatever his master ordered. Amon was worse in his eyes, a damned parasite who lived by leeching off others.
Shadow Slave: Error
Book&Literature · Luukkk