Writing/grammar - no complaints here, no major or minor issue to take me out of the story. Story structure is consistent, easy to read and follow. Action - lots of action with very descriptive scenes, they make you feel you are there. I really liked how the mc is not so much overpowered, but I think he will become so op and it won't take that long for him.
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Writing/grammar - no complaints here, no major or minor issue to take me out of the story. Story structure is consistent, easy to read and follow. Action - lots of action with very descriptive scenes, they make you feel you are there. I really liked how the mc is not so much overpowered, but I think he will become so op and it won't take that long for him.
System Genesis: The Programmer's Awakening
Fantasy · aab172