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Author note: I will stop posting for a while.
I'm rewriting a few chapters to make the story flow better, after getting some comments on it, and will try to com back as soon as I'm done.
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Raven Noir has completed the perfect game system, a masterpiece of programming unparalleled in human history. Unbeknownst to him, this achievement marks the beginning of an extraordinary journey across multiple worlds. When a certain entity takes an interest in his system and bestows it upon him,
[@#$#@ has taken a keen interest in your system, drawn to its unparalleled perfectionism]
[@#$#@ decided to bestow upon you the very system you created]
[@#$#@ wishes you the best of luck on your journey]
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Write a reviewWriting/grammar - no complaints here, no major or minor issue to take me out of the story. Story structure is consistent, easy to read and follow. Action - lots of action with very descriptive scenes, they make you feel you are there. I really liked how the mc is not so much overpowered, but I think he will become so op and it won't take that long for him.
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It's very interesting I really liked reading it and hope it keeps going forward with the same stability of publishing and with more and more exciting chapters