Webnovel Author: MissBlackRose - Novel Collection

The first 3 chapters were a blast. I loved the cliffhangers, the suspense and even the action. I love mafia stories, have done once before. A great start, though there were typos of some sort, the pilotin chapters were a joy to read.

The piloting chapters were describe with precision, I could easily envision the setting, even the emotions the male lead was feeling. Great start. The plot was intriguing and quite exciting. Although I m not much of bxb, the start of the story was catching and piquing.

One thing about this story that I loved the most, was the awesome cliffhangers. Each endings from the piloting chapters were intriguing that made me eagerly turn to the next chapter just to see what will happen next. Great start, very good plot twist as well as the characterization.

Ok, the book was light and easy to read. Suitable for teens and young adults. There's intrigue in the story and the characters, the trio, they were typical girls where a lot of readers could relate. A great start, though not my genre, but a great start. Keep it up.

This is one hell of a story, great exchange of dialogues between the fl and the ml. The setting was well described and nice flow of plot. A good read.

I added your story to my library, would read the next chapters on a daily basis. Keep it up! [img=recommend]

The plot itself, together with the characters, were properly crafted. Great start and easy to understand. I like the fl as much as I like the flow of the piloting chapters. It's an interesting and piquing story. 👍

Ooops! I had to stop at chapter 2 and make my review. The piloting chapters were interesting and it does pique my curiosity. The characters were introduced properly and the plot itself was intriguing. But what I've noticed was the scene on chapter 2. I hope you don't mind me asking, didn't your AE told you regarding the no erotic scenes from 1-10 chapters? Because my AE strictly told me about that and I just wanted to share it with you in case you aren't aware of it. If you are planning to have it contracted, which I believe you do, might want to revise your work for a much better chance of getting a contract. But everything is up to you. Great start though.

Sorry for the typos, I didn't reread my review.

I am not much of this kind of stories, but the way chapter one was started, I give credit to the author for detailing it with precision. The ml, Melton, his love for his late parents and girlfriend were realistic. I could feel him and his desire to avenge their death. Keep it up, Sir.

If I could describe it in one word, it would be... Speechless. The flow was great, characterization and setting was precisely detailed. It's a great read, although I've read until chapter 3 only, but it was enough to pique and captivate my curiosity as a reader. A must read for people who are into this kind of genre. Excellent job on this one, Sir. Very good indeed!