nadaloy774

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nadaloy774
nadaloy774
3 months ago
Posted

For someone who is sick and tired of books with either system, cultivation and blah blah this novel seems to be hitting the spot. There are not many chapters to rate this work properly with good sample size but I'm doing it nonetheless because I want MORE. Please don't drop it author-san

nadaloy774
nadaloy774
7 months ago
Replied to Joseph_Akiyama

yes, man i think the scar is gone. once the author hinted on discord that Luca kept the scar because of a reason. once that reason goes away so will the scar. I think the reason was a reminder that the knight of the wind is still alive. after he killed him, he got rid of that scar still it's sad

They weren't wide with youth. They were watching. Always. The kind of gaze that didn't just meet yours—it evaluated what stood behind it.

Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Novel as an Extra

Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Novel as an Extra

Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer

nadaloy774
nadaloy774
9 months ago
Replied to 1_EyedKing

I've read the following works of this author (in order) 1. Erotic RPG 2. Hunter Academy 3. Shattered Innocence I'll be honest, Erotic RPG being the first work of the author, was not that good. Storywise maybe but not writing wise. Also it's dropped so I wouldn't recommend reading it. Hunter Academy has an engaging story but patience is the key to read that book. The plot progression is slow and it suffers with main character hides his powers troupe but it's still hold his ground. On the other hand, Shattered Innocence is the better version of Erotic RPG according to the author and tbh it's the work I look forward to the most daily. So if I have to recommend, I'd say start with Shattered Innocence first and if you like the writing, story and author's way of developing the characters maybe read Hunter Academy next. Keep in mind that the author's main strength does not lie in writing better fight scenes, insane plot twists or world building. Rather it's in his ability to develop character throughout the story consistently. That's why you will notice a slow pace in the story together with multiple povs. But the payoff is great imo if you stick throughout

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nadaloy774
nadaloy774
9 months ago
Posted

A completely biased 5-star review because I loved the author's last two works! I'll edit this review after reaching 100 chapters

nadaloy774
nadaloy774
9 months ago
Commented

nah, unnecessary bold text. really not necessary

The fire crackled, its warm glow flickering against the cavern walls. The scent of rich, seasoned meat, fragrant herbs, and perfectly steamed rice filled the air, blending into something warm and comforting.

Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Novel as an Extra

Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Novel as an Extra

Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer

nadaloy774
nadaloy774
9 months ago
Posted

Aside from pacing everything else is well done imo. Since the authors'sapproach of writing is different it's understandable plot progression even after dozens of chaps