Daniel_7346

we're was the insta-kill that was a long drawn out fight

will dude stop being stupid soon. if he doesn't get this girl soon I'll be over thos book soon

you writers and numbers is frightening 🫣 if you could keep numbers strait it would be a miracle it 1 million for this object I. the next sentence oh it's 100 million then two paragraphs later it 1 million again but for get that let's turn 100 million into 1 billion cause why not those two numbers are close

mc is a little off kilter he's 22 but acts 12 pretty off putting really.

retard simply retarded. and why are numbers so hard for writer's. is it 20,000 or is it 200,000. every sentence the numbers change. is it simply just dont care about time stats and money so we just say stuff like. he had 100 hit points he took some damage now he only has 1000 hit points left 🤔 sure why not

this...Im not sure if simple minded is the right word or just plain stupid but I feel like. why not just give the mc a bottle of magic pills say take two and be invisible immortal.

hahaha killing intent and has not even taken a life yet 😅 🤣 😂 let me guess he will swing a sword once not only get sword intent but sword will as well pfft.

shoot i would want to play with my magic so bad that I mite just blow up the kingdom. but this mc be like hide hide hide it's scare out there oh god where's my library hide hide

and sometimes pay attention to his new Nobel job at that. im guessing it all just falls on his wife's lap as well

mc is to much of a cowardly man his wife will kill no problem be mc want to pull his pants down and bend over for everything just to not make a problem