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I have enjoyed the reading so far, no major deal breakers yet. Can I anyone tell me the raw name if its a translation

Firstly, the translation is very good for chapters I have read, I can recommend checking out translators other works. This fan fic is all over the place, 10 chapters in and the timeline and characters are already butchered. In naruto hinata was kidnapped when she was 3 y/o, here it happened at 6 y/o just so that the MC should appear in those events and connect with academy. Sasuke is 6 and just registered at academy, in original work at that time he was struggling to even produce fireball, in this fic he can do it proficiently in a fight at 6. For some reason he and his classmates believes he can beat a 13 y/o at 6. Verdict: The author didn't watch the back stories to know exactly when something happened, he just heard from somewhere and decided to write a fan fic

Thanks to the translator for doing a good job on translation, but..If you never watched Boruto or read Boruto manga you can read The story is trashy and forced. Kokugan has no relation with Rinnegan or what ever but in this story the author dropped in like its a fact. Although he managed to write a the mc without dumbing the characters. Another thing is the nerf. He absorbed ishikkis power but he said he was barely Kage level saying he is too young (13 years) to handle the power. Yet Borushiki could use boruto's(12 years) body and use power more than the kage. That too with incomplete Karma but this guy got all the powers and started giving excuses. Forcing the original plot without valid reason too.

amazing fan fiction as of chapter 100. everything is happening naturaturally, not forcing plot involvement for no reason. The Protagonist always have personal reason to act on something. Although their is the system it isn't too OP, Zanpakutō abilities not too broken early on but have potential to be the stronger he gets. overall, the author has balanced the story's power scaling properly. Even if he wants to add something to original characters he makes it consistent with the Bleach lore. Although some people might hate some elements in the story, Like how most introduced character are women but they do not affect the story flow. The Translator did an amazing job too. He makes corrections if he is wrong and make sure no Chinese names are seen in the story. But I don't like the obsession of eating and banquets.😂😂😂

Read 4 chapters, but the story is trashno effort in writing or reasoning. I have looked past the fact that the MC is cultivating since its Chinese they seem they can't write any story without these elements. But the deal breaker is that other characters seem to know things thay should only be know to the mc. The MC destroyed a place because he was cultivating alone. After Kyoraku arrived he seemed to know the place was destroyed by cultivating. I don't know how he know the concept of cultivation but how th he'll did he know it was cultivation that destroyed the place when they weren't there. Another thing (in the same scene) just after their encounter without any conversation Kyoraku attacked the MC, now the MC replicated Kyoraku shunpo by just seeing it he become faster than Kyoraku. That is a problem itself, but what's th biggest problem is Kyoraku seemed to know the MC has just mastered shunpo by seeing it once. Like how?

I have read the raw up to 230 chapters and it was at rank 2 at the time ( mind you the story is only a bit over 300 chapters). The author forgot entire point of the story, he started showing everything of characters life not a ranking video anymore. instead of Just showing a glimpse of Aizen power he started showing his entire plan, weaknesses and experiments and it got worse when it reached to Ichigo. He made them watch entire bleach😂😂 I mean even al those encounters with his Zanpakto in the inner world. And this story has a problem which is common to most Chinese stories. Progressing the timeline of side stories while the scene has even ended (They managed to send troupes into living world and fought Hollow) and the ranking video didn't progress. like as if it paused but it didn't

The translation quality is okay there is not much to on the story. What I have read so far the story will be just about showing off the his power and shocking people nothing really to do with high quality writing. The author successfully ignored the lore of bleach in 5 chapters. Commander in cheaf of stealth force going to academy? she is the last person to do that. Author thinks Soi fon graduated from academy before but the anime says she went straight into assassin training from young age. Then went so far as saying only Yoruichi and Soi Fon got perfect scores in both hakuda and shunpo in academy history. Now we have vice captain testing academy students, just to set a stage for the mc to act cool. The translation of good, it can be better if the translator picks up a good fan fiction instead