i like this story but its my personal opinion that you should focus on your story progressions the story does not look like a novel, it looks like a draft. it doesn't have finishing and one more thing is emotions either you are using a.i. or you should read some books related to psychology and human emotions and love story and the quest doesn't even need he already had a broken absorption unique skill and three fighting styles with max quality like top tire things
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Well I don't know how to tell you about my novel's good point but if you like berserk you will find it interesting . It's a little violent but maybe more in future chapters and has a solid base. I wrote it after reading berserk and i love that so you can think of that as inspiration. so thank you in advance for your support and sorry if you feel it's not liking but give a review. it's basically free.
Thanks for your support 🙏🙏.
Nah, but I can give you a Discord link, and I have an outline of most arcs, but I write and upload.
I would love to hear it
How are you writing? I mean, I am also trying to write. I know my concept is different, but still I don't know how to lead things. I had thousands of thoughts and only hundreds of words. No hard complicity, just simple sentences, but then not even one chapter could be completed. How do you do it? It's not that I don't read, but when I take a pen, it simply blanks
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