This story is very interesting i highly recommended to this story to others.
i know😅
i kinda like it...its good story...but be honest make the feel real...and writing is good I can imagined it..but show this thought... he saying all in loud...i am just think if he speak in loud then why nobody notice him?..and as you said he is genius student so I nobody talking about him? before the he go in?
Hello everyone! 👋 Yes, I’m writing a review for my own book — no shame at all 😌 Before you start reading Eclipse Zero: The Unwanted One, I want to be completely honest with you. This story is not a fast-paced, non-stop action ride from beginning to end. There will be times when it feels slow. There will be long stretches focused on slice-of-life moments, daily struggles, grief, small joys, and quiet character development. Sometimes there won’t be any fights for several chapters. Sometimes it will feel more like a drama about survival and healing than a typical progression fantasy. This is completely intentional. I wanted to show the real weight of being weak in a cruel world. I wanted Kazuki’s pain, his small hopes, and his relationships (especially with Hana) to feel genuine. The slow moments are there so that when the tragedies hit, they actually hurt. So that when he finally grows stronger, it feels earned. If you’re looking for constant action and instant power-ups, this might not be the story for you. But if you enjoy emotional depth, a punishing system, real character growth, and a protagonist who suffers but keeps moving forward… then I hope you’ll stay with me on this long journey. Thank you for giving my story a chance. I’ll do my best to make it worth your time.
Shameless author here :3 Yes, I'm reviewing my own book. No shame. Before you start reading, there's something I should mention: this story is a slow burn. Very slow at times. I like taking my time with the characters, their relationships, and the world around them, so don't expect everything to happen immediately. You'll also see quite a bit of Slice of Life mixed into the story. Not every chapter is about action or major plot twists. Sometimes it's just the characters living their lives, building connections, and growing as people. You may notice mysteries that don't get answered right away. For example, a certain soul wakes up in a new body and doesn't immediately ask why he's there or how it happened. That's intentional. Some questions are meant to linger for a while before the story reveals the answers. So if you're the type of reader who enjoys gradual development, hidden mysteries, and long-term payoffs, I hope you'll enjoy the journey. Thanks for reading, and feel free to ask me anything in the comments! ♡
i read your review.. i will try to improve more.. thanks for your review with honesty ❤️
thx man
i fix it in my latter ch like ch 6 to 8
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The world didn't evolve. It broke. Civilizations fell beneath the weight of reality itself as monstrous rifts tore open the sky, unleashing creatures that should never have existed. Humanity survived—not through miracles, but through blood, sacrifice, and the rise of Shadow Hunters, warriors capable of wielding powers that defy the laws of nature. Today, monsters, dungeons, and supernatural abilities have become part of everyday life. Children grow up dreaming of becoming hunters. Nations are built around power. Strength determines worth. But all of that is only the surface. Hidden beneath the fragile order of this new world, an ancient truth is beginning to awaken. A truth buried so deeply that even the strongest hunters have never glimpsed it. Governments hide it. Noble families fear it. Even monsters seem to obey it. And somewhere in the shadows... Something impossible has opened its eyes. It does not belong to this world. It does not fear humanity. It does not seek peace. It is patient. It is watching. And for now... It is wearing a human face.61 Chs 31 Collections
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Eclipse Zero:The Unwanted One
At 8:00 AM, twenty-year-old university student Kazuki Ito was living a perfectly ordinary life with his loving family. At 9:00 AM the same day, a bizarre solar eclipse shattered reality, dropping him into an alien world of obsidian skyscrapers and blood-red skies. He had no power. No status. No way home. Then the Eclipse System awakened — not as a gift, but as a cold, merciless observer. It offered no tutorials, no cheats, and no mercy. Only brutal "Lessons" that punished hesitation with pain and death. To survive, Kazuki must slowly discard pieces of his humanity while clinging desperately to the memory of the family he lost. In a world where the weak are truly unwanted, Kazuki begins as the lowest existence — an Index VII ghost. Through blood, grief, and quiet moments of fragile hope (like building a small fruit stall with a kind healer named Hana), he is forced to grow in the harshest way possible. This is not a story of instant power. This is the story of a kind boy learning how to become something colder… just to make it back home. Eclipse Zero: The Unwanted One — A dark progression fantasy about family, trauma, and the high cost of survival.17 Chs 2 Collections
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Reverse Eclipse
Naoki Ashford was born to rule. A prodigy of the noble Ashford family in the floating city of Lunaris, he believed only the strong deserved to exist. But on the day a mysterious solar eclipse swallowed the sky, his world vanished. He opened his eyes as Issei Hoshino, an ordinary baby on Earth. For twenty years, he buried his past and adapted to a peaceful life, convincing himself that Aerith had become nothing more than a distant dream. Then another solar eclipse arrived. For a single impossible moment, the moon moved across the sky faster than reality should allow. Nothing happened. ...Or so everyone believed. As strange disappearances, unexplained tremors, and impossible phenomena begin spreading across Earth, Issei realizes one terrifying truth: The world wasn't destroyed. It was rewritten. Somewhere beyond reality, unseen beings are watching. The Origins are awakening. The Eclipse has begun. And this time... There will be no escape.8 Chs 2 Collections
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Eclipse Zero: The Unwanted One
At 8:00 AM, twenty-year-old university student Kazuki Ito was living a perfectly ordinary life with his loving family. At 9:00 AM the same day, a bizarre solar eclipse shattered reality, dropping him into an alien world of obsidian skyscrapers and blood-red skies. He had no power. No status. No way home. Then the Eclipse System awakened — not as a gift, but as a cold, merciless observer. It offered no tutorials, no cheats, and no mercy. Only brutal "Lessons" that punished hesitation with pain and death. To survive, Kazuki must slowly discard pieces of his humanity while clinging desperately to the memory of the family he lost. In a world where the weak are truly unwanted, Kazuki begins as the lowest existence — an Index VII ghost. Through blood, grief, and quiet moments of fragile hope (like building a small fruit stall with a kind healer named Hana), he is forced to grow in the harshest way possible. This is not a story of instant power. This is the story of a kind boy learning how to become something colder… just to make it back home. Eclipse Zero: The Unwanted One — A dark progression fantasy about family, trauma, and the high cost of survival.41 Chs 3 Collections
This story is not fast-paced. Eclipse Zero: The Unwanted One is a slow-burn tale about survival, grief, healing, and quiet growth in a cruel world. There will be long stretches without fights. There will be slice-of-life moments, daily struggles, and heavy emotional beats. The punishing system and Kazuki’s suffering are intentional — I want his pain to feel real, and his eventual growth to feel truly earned. If you’re looking for non-stop action and rapid power-ups, this might not be the story for you. But if you enjoy deep character work, emotional weight, genuine relationships, and a protagonist who keeps moving forward despite everything… then I hope you’ll join me on this journey. Thank you for giving it a chance. I’ll do my best to make it worth your time. — Kanzaki Reiji
Eclipse Zero:The Unwanted One
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