yojuiceman

yojuiceman

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2017-10-12 Joined United States
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yojuiceman
yojuiceman
1 years ago
Commented

I might be bugging but these chapters seem shorter and shorter

yojuiceman
yojuiceman
1 years ago
Commented

Happy Birthday 🤘🏾💪🏾🙏🏾🎉🎊

yojuiceman
yojuiceman
1 years ago
Commented

For one most definitely take your rest when needed, for two honestly the story is flowing well I think someone mentioned it already but his small army always going up against a huge army seems a little unfair to his people no, atleast for a lord who cares, I know he needs to make money but building stronger army units under the different species he has under him should be priority as well as another round of fortress/land development.

yojuiceman
yojuiceman
1 years ago
Commented

Can’t wait to see the harvest from the war 🤓

yojuiceman
yojuiceman
1 years ago
Replied to yojuiceman

I would also like to add if you do info dump maybe an extra chapter to keep the pace (for the extra long info dumps) would help as well but the pace has been great as I’ve said before.

yojuiceman
yojuiceman
1 years ago
Commented

A flow of both is necessary, you are doing perfect, the character isn’t progressing too fast like 99% of novels on here, it’s not the same cliché storylines that have been repeated several times, you not only build the character but the characters and the world around him which makes for a super immersive story. It’s very rare that I find a novel I enjoy on here especially with your release rate overall I would rate this novel 9.5 out of 10 the .5 is for my ruined sleep schedule waiting up to read an extra chapter 😂😂😂

yojuiceman
yojuiceman
1 years ago
Commented

Still no new chapter is crazy, hopefully the author is okay though

yojuiceman
yojuiceman
3 years ago
Posted

I would be wrong to say this is a bad novel like the authors other novel they are all exceptional pieces of work with one flaw he constantly drops repeats which we end up wasting coins on and we don’t get reembursed no extra chapters he doesn’t even give an explanation as to why it’s happening… so while I would love to give him 5 stars he’s gone weeks sometimes months without dropping just to drop a bunch of repeat chapters and in that case I would rate it 1star if the story lines weren’t up to par

yojuiceman
yojuiceman
3 years ago
Commented

There has to be a way to report this

yojuiceman